the hurtful dream

this is a story of a dream i had on the night of 1-15-06 it was about my grandfather. most of ya'll know i lost him last year some of my friends were there the day after. they know how i feel now about this. the truth is i feel as if when he died a part of me died with him. most of my friends witnessed me begina ll depressed cause i write poems about it they hear me cry. the dream i am about to let ya'll read hurt me so bad when i woke up but in my dream i felt like everything that was happening was real.1

in this dream i was at my nanas house and i was sitting there in the living room watching my niece this is what was said.2

my niece:what is worng aunt beth?3

me:nothing i am okay just thinking of old memories.4

my niece: oh 5

me: *starting to cry*6

*nana walks into the living room*7

nana:beth are you okay you seem upset.8

me:i am nana just, i jsut wish it never happend you know.9

nana: i know10

me: *crying*11

*back door opens*12

*someone walks in*13

me:what it is impossible14

*nana faints*15

*my niece runs out of the room*16

Me: i thought you were dead*17

*looking at my grandfather*18

grandfather:it takes more than that to take you away from me.19

*runs into my grandfathers arms and hugs him tight*20

*crying really hard*21

now you know why i loved him so much he was very sweet this dream hurt worse than anything before i miss him so much.22

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  • Forgotten Renegade8
    January 24, 2006
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    I am sure about your grandfather always being with you because I know from experience that if you keep someone that is passed away close to your heart they never truely die. I still do that with all of my grandparents. I have none left. And I am sure it is not your time because you are young and full of energy. I know how much energy you have when you are happy... YOU TALK ALOT lol. But that is a good thing You have your whole life ahead of you. You make the best of your life. No one else can completely do that for you. They can only try and help you acheive what you are striving for. Remember it elizabeth. Keep him close and he will never truely die. But even if he truely does die for you. He will always be watching you from wherever he is. I know my grandparents are watching me. You will see him again. Just not yet (better not be yet... your to young to die >_< ). L8terz

  • heartofpainfultears
    January 23, 2006
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    how can u be so sure heath

  • Forgotten Renegade8
    January 23, 2006
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    awesome

    He will always be with you. No matter what. Just as long as you keep him close to your heart he will always be looking at you from heaven You will see him again. But not yet. It is not your time yet.


  • January 17, 2006
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    love ya like a sister

    I know how much it hurts beth. i have lost all my grandfathers (i had 3) my grandma mattox and my dad. but he is all around you and if you look really close you can see signs of his presence. my dad comes to me in my dreams and little signs and he makse my doll cry. just hang in there ok
    love ya like a sis
    april


  • TorturedLifeandSoul
    January 16, 2006
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    i'm sorry beth i know that must have hurt you a lot. but some times that's how people you love contact you from the after life. they come to visit you through dreams. At least you got to see him once after he died. it may have hurt but it's a good thing you got to see him. i'm sorry it upset you. well anyways i love you like a sis. i'm really sorry. well i'll give you a hug tomorrow.

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