If I ever sat, upon the grass, among the fields of green.1
And did not munch upon that grass, then the field I did not see.2
For with my great black blobby spots, 3
And the red barn I sleep in,4
Do I yearn,5
For that sweet grass, among the fields of green.6
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Kim, to bad I couldn't have entered the other one.
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this is really cute. i like that the cow appreciates what is in her own field, so it seems. very good write.
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At first I thought you were "speaking" as a human, but was very relieved that you were "speaking" for/as a cow.
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this is actually very cute. i like it a lot.
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doesnt really seem like a short story to me. it seems more like a poem anyways good luck in this contest
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it was this thing for a random contest
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interesting....its good for being a poem about a cow. may i ask what inspired you to write this? its kinda out there.
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Oh, this is a great poem, lol. hugs
I love the background though, totally works for the randomness of this.
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