Ghost Lover

She died. Her family didn't know it was going to happen, but she did.  Boom! Just like that, she knew. Kara was shy. A small brown haired, deep brown eyed girl. Plenty of friends but something held her back. 1

Before she died, she was at school, decided today was the day to do it, kiss Tyder. She rushed at him, arms and all and just...pushed her lips hard on his. Very unexpected it was, but then she let go and whispered softly in his ear, " Wanna know why I did that?" Confusion was all it was but he nodded his head yes, wanting to know the real answer. Still whispering in his ear she said,"Because, I love you and to tell you the truth...I'm going to die." Kara couldn't take it anymore, the emotion built up inside, the heat in her face, all of it. So she let go of him and ran as fast as she could. Tripping every little bit of the way, she didn't look back. She pushed the door open and went inside. "Wait, Kara!"Tyder yelled. She caused a scene but she didn't care. All of a sudden she stopped running. Just standing in one spot with her eyes with a glaze over them. Tyder caught up to her and touched her shoulder lightly. Some people looking their way, wondering was going on. 2

"Kara..."Tyder paused, he sighed not know what to say. Kara grabbed his hand lightly on her shoulder then squeezed it in pain. Grunting some, she fell to her knees and sobbed lightly. "This is it...I...I'm gonna...die." She fell all the way to the ground in unbearable pain. Tyder went to the ground where she was and lifted her up to hold her in his lap. His eyes were very watery and he could barely see. "How did you know?"Tyder asked softly. Her voice barely non existent, she managed to say,"I just knew, but I had to tell you that I love you with all the heart." The gleam in her eyes vanished and she ever so slowly closed her eyes and her breathe falling to an end. The grip she had on his hand loosened, and that is when he knew, she was...gone. He held her tightly to his body and cried fast tears down his face. Everyone just watched in astonishment and despair. 3

Her spirit slowly stretched out of her body. Of course, believing in God, Heaven,and all holy things; she expected to go to heaven and walk through those beautiful gates of heaven. But something happened, she didn't rise to heaven. "There must be a wait, of course people dieing everyday and all."she said to herself, trying to make up something that she knew wasn't true. But she waited and waited until she gave up and realized she was a ghost. Her ghostly body fell to its knees and sobbed. She sobbed by Tyder, realizing that she wasn't alone anymore. He was dying inside and she was already dead, but she had him now, she finally had him, but he just wouldn't know it. Her body glowed in a loving gleam but when she felt the coldest, she was warmed by her love for him. She leaned up against him sobbing and watching her dead body.4

Author notes

So what do you guys think so far, it just kinda came to me when I was coming home from Evit. LOL I'll probably continue it but please tell me what you think thanks!

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  • eastbrook
    January 22, 2006
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    Wow. This was great. I think though that I needed more detail. I mean. Why? I thought it was suicide but you changed that one. The last paragraph was really good though. that saved the story.

  • whisper inthe light
    January 12, 2006
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    This is a sad chapter. This is bery emotional. Very good write up on first chapter. Please write more, I can't wait for more.