there i was on the day before new years eve and i thought i was going to be home alone just like last year and the year before that and the year before that. I ask my mom "Can i call carrie? I want to see if i can go to there apartment new years." carrie is my sister and a really cool kid. She moved to an apartment last september with her fiance and we are starting to become more and more distant. 1
my brother ben sneers "Why do you always ask? and of course not! Me and carrie are going to a party new years!"2
I say "well thanks for telling me that now jerk." I slunk off to my room. I'm pretty mad at ben and beening alone new years so i dicided to call her any ways. i call and a woman ansers ""hello?"3
"hey can i talk with carrie?" i say4
"well who do you think you're talking to?" carrie goes on to say "so what do you want iota?"5
"well i was just wondering what you're doing new years?" i say cashually.6
"nothing not even staying up got to work so i have to sleep. Why?"7
"ben said that he and you were going to a party."8
"No just have to work, that all?"9
"Yep have fun. bye"10
"bye" i hang up more mad and annoied now know that my sister can come down and i can't go up and my parents are going out for dinner. I just ashumed that my brother was just joking about the party but was going to leave. At supper we get around to new years and i find out that my brother isn't going to leave and will spend new years here. Now that's worse i have to spend more time with my brother not cool. 11
The next day i play video games and eat and play more vedeo games until my parents leave and i throw some frozen chicken and fries in to an oven. my bother and i watch a movie and then he says "lets play madden."12
Then we do and i beat him and he says "okay you want a beer?" This was the first time my brother had ever consider me old enough to do any thing to driving no games no any thing but he offered me a beer all i could think was "A WHAT!" he didn't say is maddly more sly like he thought he could beat me if i had a beer in me. like he would be willing to break the law to win a simple game! not like him and not cool.13
I said "sure"14
He replide "you better get a chaser."15
"thanks for the warning"16
"yeah it's preity old," Then he whent in to the barn to get the beer and i grabed a soda. "okay start up the game!" he said. I did then grabeb a beer and opened it and he said "oh you won't drink frist." Then i did my first drink. After that we played some madden and finished our beers me finishing second by a long shot but i won madden. 17
I got nervous and said "our parents will be home soon" so we brought the beer back to the barne and took care of our empties and soda can and i used mouth was and brushed my teeth but i couildn't get the smell off of me. my brother didn't care and didn't do any thing to hide it. My parents were tierd end didn't care the next day it was back to normal i had a buz the noght before but nothing the next day i gesue it was a mental drunk not physical but oh well no harm no fowel and now i have had beer. I geuse thats just the way it goes scot free.18
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That's pretty weird. it's doesn't seem to have much of a plot. You had a beer and nothing happened? It just doesn't make sense.
Also, you really need to use the spell check before you post your story.
