Two green eyes opened upon the head of the form in the smoke.1
A great silance ensued in which the five of us stared at each other in turn... 2
...but the eyes watched us with cold intelligence and malis...3
I noticed a flicker of movement out of the corner of my eye as a large moth detached itself from a musty old pair of socks and flew over to were the baterd wooden chest was lying half open and on its side, but the being in the smoke noticed it as well and with a lazy flick of its eye, the moth burst into a blue and black ball of flame and before the body could hit the ground was entirly consumed.4
The form looked at me and I swear I could see a look of purist loathing in those evil eyes...5
Jason who sat opposite me was putting a massive hand through his thick grey mop of hair.He looked as nervous as I felt but since there were two girls watching him, he stood up carefully and gingerly and adressed the Demon in the pentigram.6
His mouth opened the first time but nothing came out except for a slight whimper...7
He caught me watching him with a small and feeble smile on my face...I loved watching him struggle,five years of his pushing me around did that to me...8
He suddenly gained a firm look that was ruined by the fear on his face...this time he managed to say to the creatures feet:"W-W-Who are y-you...?" his voice quivered and failed as he sat down with a squeel like a little girl...the creature glared at him until...9
"Who are you?" the voice came from beside me...from Natasha...she was standing and looking the Demon in the eyes with a look of scared determination on her face...the vains in her arms were high and casting small shadows on her arms...10
The being considered her for a moment before finaly speaking...its voice sounded as if it was conprised of two and it came from everywhere and nowhere at once:" I AM ASMODEUS,THE ALINJAER EL MINé, MASTER OF THE UNHOLY BLADE, DESTROYER OF MORENGON, ALANTIS, ELIPHEAR, MENISPHEODUS, POMPIE, BUILDER OF THE HOUSE OF DEATH, LEADER OF THE BLACK ARMY'S AND KEEPER OF HELL...NOW LITTLE MORTAL, I ASK IN TURN...WHO ARE YOU TO SUMMON ME?11
Author notes
This part two of the first half (duh) I dont know if there will be a part 3...
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hehe lovely you write exciting stories, i like how you made Jason choke. great job!
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You see I really am looking forward to part 3 so I hope you do write it. This was once again exciting and well written, really descriptive.
beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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I hate jocks...there normaly assholes...I based this one on a guy in my class who is also called JASON...the girl is based on...well I dont know really...I think it comes mainly from a book I read called Ptolemys Gate...
Thanks for the appluse
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ptolemy's gate is amazing...all of the books in that series are amazing. just had to throw that in there. i love you.
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Can this get any better? First you have the pussy jock and the relentless girl! I really do love your descriptions though. It's a really entertaining read if i do say so!
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Ahhhh...thanks mum...I checked the spelling JUST for you!!!
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Ahhhh much better,
Well written and scary. And you spelling..... great 
Well Done
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dadadaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! We all gonna die...one day...
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Okay...I suffer from nightmares and this freaks me out! Bollocks - We're all gunna die!...or just the one who summoned it. Nice one bro
Lizzy x x x
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