Nothing matters anymore to Aidan, a guy in blood-covered overalls and a mask like that of Jason Voorhees...Growing up Aidan loved watching horror movies, it became like an obsession and every single movie in his collection was rated R.1
Aidan is now a twenty six year old man and lives in a little shack-like house boat out on a lake, a lake that nobody knows about. By now Aidan don't know the difference between reality and fantasy and every night he does the same thing, taking fantasy from his movies and making them into reality for his own sick twisted mind.2
Tonight is the night of Marti-Gra and Aidan has put on his overalls and mask and went off to Marti-Gra to find him a victim...3
At Marti-Gra he found two ladies who looked liked twins dressed up like kitty cats and he motioned for them to come over, knowing from experience they were the trusting type. They came over right away and in no time the two girls Courtney and Jessica were on their way home with Aidan. 4
"You know Marti-Gra is a bad time to trust people...I mean everyone is in costume and you never know when you might be with a killer." Aidan said casually as they went into his house.5
"Oh Jess and I don't believe in that kind of crap, I mean seriously nothing remotely interesting has ever even happened in this city~" said Courtney getting cut off by Jessica "Whoa Courtney! Don't you ever watch the news?...I mean people go missing in this city all the time! None of them have been found dead but still it doesn't mean they're alive." 6
"She's right." said Aidan from the kitchen. "What are you doing?" asked Jessica to Aidan when she noticed he was in the kitchen. "Oh I thought you ladies might like a drink." he answered bringing in a platter with three wine glasses on it. "Oh thanks." said Courtney quickly grabbing a glass and taking a sip. Jessica took hers off the platter slowly saying "Thank you~" almost under her breath.7
"So are you two twins?" asked Aidan taking his glass, putting the platter down on the table, and sitting in a chair. "Oh no I am twenty-two and Courtney's going to be next month, we are actually BFF's." said Jessica. "Uhh BFF?" said Aidan sort of confused..."Best Friends Forever." said Courtney straightening it out. "Oh oh yeah...of course heh sorry." said Aidan acting like he understood. 8
"Um where's your bathroom?" asked Jessica five minutes later. "Uhh umm well uh just go down this hall and down a couple of steps and turn left, there will be a door to your immediate left...go through that and it is at the end of the hall." replied Aidan trying to show her with hand gestures. So she went in search of the bathroom, leaving Courtney alone with Aidan.9
When Jessica got to the end of the hall right in front of the bathroom she noticed a light flickering in a room to the right. She slowly looked over at the door until curiosity got the best of her and she slowly opened the door. Inside were newspaper clippings all over the walls, going on into the room she looked at the clippings closer and noticed each one was a report about someone declared missing and thought to be dead.10
"What are you doing in here!" yelled Aidan who had come up behind Jessica and nearly gave her a heart attack "OH! ...I was just on my way to the um the bathroom and I noticed a light flickering from under the door so I thought I'd see if it was shorting out~" said Jessica in a faint voice.11
"Did you make it to the bathroom?" Aidan asked, "No not yet, like I said I was on my way." Jess replied. "Well why don't we stay outta here okay." said Aidan in an ever so eased manner while walking her out of the room. "Wa-wait! why do you have all these clippings all over the wall?" asked Jessica afraid she might have done something stupid. "......I'm a detective." was all he replied. "Oh...okay, I'm sorry I didn't mean to intrude." she said. "That is alright you didn't know now why don't you go ahead and go to the bathroom so that you can get back to the living room so we can find something fun to do." said Aidan smiling "Okay." said Jessica as they parted ways.12
Jessica opened the bathroom door and walked into the dank dim lit room. There were years of rust in the sink and toilet and chipped tiles on the wall. She thought it was disgusting but after Aidan scared the crap out of her she really had to pee so she went ahead and used the toilet, then she turned on the sink to wash her hands but no water came out, so she turned the knob back so that it would be off. Before she left she heard a dripping coming from the tub so she opened the shower curtain and quickly backed up screaming as she fell back against the wall.13
In the tub was a pool of blood filling about half the tub and floating organs including a girls head, brains, guts, and surprisingly a fetus...Jessica sat there in the floor against the wall screaming and crying surprised that no one came to find out why~14
TO BE CONTINUED~15
Author notes
Chapter 2 is at http://allpoetry.com/poem/1773003
Chapter 3 is at http://allpoetry.com/poem/1825078
Chapter 4 is at http://allpoetry.com/poem/2259690
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Comments
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WOW it was........ scary.
which is a good thing!
great job! the emotions prtrayed by your characters are very well done, as for the setting and plot, it was amazing! great job ^_^

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I should have Chapter 2 on here by Monday right now I am on my mom's computer and I keep getting kicked off so I am kind of scared to try to type up a whole chapter on it.
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Wow, very scary. I like scary stories. You should let me know when your done with the second chapter. This is great! I dont know what else to say...so I wont.
Saddened Amber Eyes -
Amazing, Awesome, Outfreakingstanding
Wow... That's amazing... Scary... and Creepy, I too have a scary series... although Mine is more of a thriller... along with a long story... But it' got some nasty stuff in there... You should check it out... It's called "Trapped in Mind" it's long but suspensful... Bout a guy who wakes up, has a seizure, faints... and ends up in the mind of killer... Well Any way... I really did love yours... Seriously, I usually don't get as freaked out from a story... cuz its just words... no music or anything but when Aiden popped out at her... I got scared... cuz my T.V. is on mute... its at night and I am alone... So yeah... Well Nice work... And if you don't mind, could you message me when you are done with the chapters? Cuz I like this story! Suspensfully Creepy!


