The murder at midnight?

*alarm clock goes off*1

*the man and woman yawn*2

"Good morning dear, sleep well,said the woman." "Why yes i did, what about you,said the man." "I did too dear,"said the woman. The man and woman walked down stares to get there breakfast. Then when they looked at the television they seen a big news alert.This alert said as the following,"MURDER AT MIDNIGHT, FOUND A MAN AND A WOMAN AND 2 CHILDREN DEAD, WITNESSES SAID THEY HEARD SCREAMING AT THE HOUSE AND CALLED THE POLICE,BY THE TIME THEY GOT THERE IT WAS TOO LATE.THE KILLER RAN OFF AND LEFT NOTHING NO WEAPON OR ANYTHING.WE TELL EACH AND EVERYONE OF YOU TOO LOCK YOUR DOORS AS GOOD AS YOU CAN. WE DO NOT KNOW WHEN HE WILL STRIKE NEXT.THE MURDER WAS COMMITED AT 205 HOLLY PINE DRIVE."The couple looked at the t.v. and then each other and said"who do you suppose killed a family of four that quick and escaped."said the woman."I dont know but whoever did it must be a pretty good killer."said the man.3

*doors closes*4

*foot steps coming down stairs*5

"Hey mom, hey dad sleep well"said the children."Yes we did, how about ya'll,"said the man and woman."Okay,but i woke up in the middle of the night to the sound of sirens from police cars."said the girl."Me too, what do you suppose happened."said the boy."Tom dear can i talk to you a moment"said the woman. "sure sarah",said tom. "What should we tell them, i mean should we tell them a lie or tell them there is a murderer on the lose." Sarah said."I think we should tell them the truth this could be dangerous dear." said tom."the crime happened at holly pine drive."6

*sarah and tom walk back into the kitchen*7

"Rachel,bill" said sarah. "yes mom" they said at the same time."We dont know how to tell you this kids but umm we will tell you this that we heard" sarah said."tom tell them now.""Kids last night at midnight a family of four was murdered, we dont know who done it or anything all we know is that there neighbors called the police because they heard screaming by the time the police got there it was too late. No weapon was found either."said tom.8

*kids looked alarmed*9

Rachel said"do they know the name of the family that was murdered","Cause my friend ashley hill lives in that area.""They never said the name just the address.""Sorry but ya'll need to get to school"said tom."okay"said the kids.10

*gets in car*11

*gets out of car and starts going in to the high school*12

Rachal says"mom can you please tell me the address please.""No dear your fixin to be late."said sarah.13

*rachel walks off and goes into the school*14

"hey tanya"says rachel"hey girl"says tanya.15

*tanya hands rachel a note and tell her she cant talk right now she is going to be late*16

*rachel sticks note in her purse*17

"settle down class.please sit down and listen carefully." says the biology teacher.18

*class sits down and it silenced in the room*19

"Now then i am sure most of you know about the murder at midnight last night in holly pine drive. it was a family of four they did not say the name just the address."20

*kids looked shocked*21

"you mean to tell me that ya'll didnt know about the murder"22

"NO"said the class."I did my parents told me and my brother this morning"said rachel."really""did they tell you the address" "no they didnt i wish they did cause my friend rachel lives in that area"said rachel.23

*teachers computer says you have new email*24

"hang on a minute rachel""okay rachel what was your friends last name"25

"rachel hill why?""rachel i am so sorry but your friend and your friends family is dead."26

*rachel fell to the floor crying*27

*todd, a guy rachel likes comes over and sees if she is going to be okay*28

*bell rings for lunch*29

"rachel, are you going to be okay i am really worried about you?"says todd."i'll be fine it is just one of my good friends was murdered and i dont even know who did it."says rachel.todd says"i hope they find the person who done this and gives him the death penilty and kills him.""did tanya give you that note today"says todd"oh i havent read it yet hang on"says rachel.30

*rachel takes note out of pocket and reads it*31

*rachel screams with joy*32

*rachel hugs todd*33

"yes,yes,yes,yes"says rachel"i know it is not the best day but i figuered i would ask you and now i have"says todd."I'm glad you did"said rachel.34

*bell rings to go home*35

"Mom this is my new boyfriend todd.""hello todd."nice to meet you mrs.smith"said todd."see you tommorrow okay baby"said rachel."okay"said todd.36

*todd walks off*37

*rachel get into car.*38

later on the family will get a surprise visit from someone they will not be happy to see. rachel is already upset from losing her friend will she be able to survive what will happen tonight?39

rachel and her family were sitting in the living watching a movie todd was over there as well and then suddenly the light went out.40

*screams of terror lash out into the darkness filled room*41

"is everyone okay" said tom"yeah"everyone said.42

now it is time to end this tale the whole family dies by beiung stabbed and shot and then the killer gets todd and kills him too and then the cops kill the killer43

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