Untitled at the moment.

All I have dreamed my whole entire life has been to live my own life.  I want to make my own decisions.  My life has been lived under the command of others, never myself.  I am a free individual on the outside, but my whole soul is enslaved.  If ever THEY found out about my dreams, I would have to suffer a cruel punishment.  But I only want one thing in my whole life, and I have never been able to acheive it.1

I am a part of one of their complicated devices, a cameo puppet in their show.  Through all the pain and suffering, I have only wanted one thing.2

I want a life that is mine.3

Author notes

The first page to a new story I'm TRYING to write.  I hope everyone likes the beginning.  This will keep going, don't worry... but I'm not so sure where it will go.  It took me a while just to write this, and I'm usually a very fast writer...

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  • January 9, 2006
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    very good

    i thought it was very well writen, ant sad.