Through the mist I was searching for something. Worry was rooted in my mind. I’ve lost him. Maybe I still have hope. I ran frantically past houses and down my street to where he might’ve been. I stopped as I saw him and gasped for breath. He turned around and eyed me suspiciously. 1
“What are you doing here?” he questioned me.2
“I…I was worried,” I stuttered, still out of breath.3
“Well, you should leave. You aren’t meant to be here.”4
“I can go wherever I want to. I don’t need your consent to do anything!” I went on a tangent and wandered off to dangerous lands. I didn’t yet know how his temper could ignite just as fast as mine. He grabbed my arms in a fiery rage.5
“Get away! Leave this place…NOW!” he pushed me back and turned around staring at the lake below the cliff.6
“No. I must tell you something,” I pleaded.7
“GO!” a face turned around but it was not his. The creature’s skin was green and rotten. Its hook nose had a thin layer of puss surrounding it and its eyes were black as pitch.8
I woke up in a sweat. It was just a dream. A mere dream. Nothing more. But somehow the "dream" lingered on.9
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u should finish that...... i really loved it... so god damn it girl finish it so i can read it, please
tra la la
i love u
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Interesting....sounds like the Hulk....hehe
great start....hope write more....Luv Caz 
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hey this beggining is really good.... hope I can see the rest!
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hey this reminds me of one of the Sweep books...SHE CAME OUT WITH A NOVEL AND THE MAIN CHARACTER HAS A DAUGHTER!!!!!!ok I'm done...great start of a story, can't wait for what comes next
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yay you started this when you were at my house you deffinately have a great talent for writing stories and especially putting a twist in them such as the puss around his nose and like i said before ewwww! lol neway cant wait to read the continuance of this and oh yeah get a title lol
keep up the great writes
~ur sis~
Gem
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