It was a dark night you could hear the wind howling all around the plane .You could also hear thunder and see lighting off in the distance . It was no night to be flying . But they were flying because of a distress call they had recieved. About a group of people trapped in a cave because of a huge grizzly bear . There had been rumors that this bear had killed 20 or more people but noone had been able to catch him in the act . Noone dared go after him .But people were in danger and they had to do what they could even if it meant their own lives . There in that plane was a passenger and a pilot . The passenger was resting his eyes while the pilot flew the aircraft at over 15,000 feet . All of a sudden there was a big vibration throught the cockpit and cargo hold ."The passenger awoke and asked " what was that? " The pilot replied " this storm is a bad one we might have to land sooner than we thought . Then a bright flash of lighting struck and hit the wing knocking it off of the jet . The pilot realizing what had happened told the passenger to buckle up . The plane was going down you could feel it speeding up . You could hear its engines going beound their maxiumum rpm`s . The passenger reached for a case and grabbed on tight to it . Suddenly you could see the woods and mountain ranges as the jet soared underneath the storm . The pilot made one last manuever towards a river he was hopeing it would help them to survive the crash . With each second the crash was coming closer and closer into being . Then finally the jet slammed into the water the pilot died on impact and the passenger recieved a head wound but nothing to serious he couldn`t heal himself . The case he was holding onto slipped out of his hands and sunk to the bottom as he swam towards shore . He was thankful it was July and not Januaray. He quickly took his clothes off and rung them out to make sure he was as dry as possible . He knew the area they had crashed in well but he also knew it was 100 miles away from any shelter or other people . The only people that were within 20 miles were the very people he had to save . Promblem was the case he lost had the only gun he had with him in it . He had no idea what he was going to do the rescue those people but he knew he must risk his life for theirs.He got out his G.P.S he was lucky it was waterproof and in his pocket . He turned it on and saw he was not but 15 miles from the area the distress call came from . He put his clothes back on and realized he had his tranquilizer pistol and ammo in his pockets he checked to see if it still worked . Success it fired perfectly he loaded it up and took off in the direction of the bear he was searching for .a hour later the storm had just passed he was about 10 miles away from the area . The moon light up the sky and ground around him . He saw something off in the distance. It was a bear track a day old, but it was pointing in the right direction. He followed the tracks as he continued north . He finally reached the area it was dark and quiet.... too quiet . He saw a cave up the hillside he ran towards it . He keep a look out for the bear but no signs of him. The tracks lead to the cave but then they went off in a diffrent direction . He figured the bear had given up and left . He walked into the cave it was a small cave too small for a bear his size . it smelled horrible though like there was something dead in there . He found a flashlight still on but left on the ground as if dropped and never picked up again . He continued on until he heard a loud scream further in the cave . He started running with his tranquilizer ready . He found the people all of the safe and sound . He said im here to rescue you im from wild life rescue why did you scream just then . The daughther said I broke a nail ! The man shook his head all of a sudden he heard a bear roar. He realized then that the cave had two ways in . He said how did you get a distress singal out ? The father replied with this radio . The man took it from him . He said alrite is there anyone here who can`t keep up if tell you to follow me ? The daughter raised her hand . He said alrite ill carry you . He said ok you are gonna have to run as fast as you can . He asked the father one last question wheres your transportation at ? He said 5 miles that way is our camp our suv is there. He said alrite run to it once we get there we will start it up and get out of here alrite ?They all nodded . The bear was getting closer the man said come on after he checked to make sure the bear was not out there . They all began to run desperatly for their lives fearing death at a maxiumum 10 on a scale of 1 to 10. They got to the suv they all got in and were about to leave when the bear came out of nowhere and broke the driver window and bit the the man who not only survived drowning but saved their lives. He reached for his gun but he misplaced it while running. The father grabbed his 30-06 bolt action and aimed at the bear . He fired once the bear backed off but came back he fired again but the bear still came back the man who had suffered the injury grabbed the gun and shot the bear 4 more times before it finally went down . The bear is the world record grizzly bear biggest ever hunted and shot by a man . Grand father? said a small boy in a museum . Yes son ? Is that a true story ? Yes my son as true as we are standing here looking at that bear .1
Who was the man in the story ? His name was charles remington greatest hunter the world has ever seen . Hey his last name is my first name . Yes my boy they named you after him . The boy said i want to be just like him when I grow up. You will be my son you will .2
Author notes
this is a story about survival about bravery this is just the beggining the main person in this book the lil boy asking his grandfather questions is remington vertigo and this is his story enjoy
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Nice dramatic effect. But editing is a must.
^_^ I like the ending too.
