'The day I completely loose my sanity is the day I'll seek revenge. You, my dear, have the honor of being first on my list.' With these words he'll shutter. She'll whisper it in his ear while slowly running her fingers through his hair and end it with a soft kiss to his lips. He will stay wide eyed and shook up by her words. With a mysterious smirk and an evil glare she'll turn her back and walk away with a sway of her hips. Her red and black dress will flow behind her like the reflection of a bright red light house in the dark black waters of the night. 1
As she turns her smirk fades and her eyes water. Those are her dreams. This is her reality. Her beautiful dress turns to rags. She falls to her knees. She will pray. 'Please, God, tell me why he doesn't love me.' God refuses to answer because this is what she can't see. No matter how many times she denies...she isn't sane. For this is his reason for rejecting her.2
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its nice good emotion keep at it
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8 out of 10
I think this pretty good... I think you need to make it a little longer and more detailed...but nice write -
i am hardly suicidal... and there are dates to when i wrote my poems on the bottom... i would never kill myself.. but that doesn't mean i won't write about it
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Please, comment on my poetry which is more interesting than this.
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