Katie and her best friend Emily were walking down the street one night. Their parents protested against them going be them selves. Because i mean, their are lots of weirdos out there. But the girls ignored them. 1
"Are we almost their?" Emily wined because her feet ached.2
"Yes. After we cross this upcoming street we will be at the part." Katie said.3
They kept walking until Emily spotted a penny lying on the side walk. " Who, it's heads up."4
As she bent down to grab it Katie stood waiting. But she heard a noise to her left. She looked around her seeing no one. She shrugged of the feeling of someone watching her and when Emily was ready they kept walking. 5
The whole way to the park Katie could feel eyes boring into her. But she did not tell Emily this because she would think she was crazy. When they got to the park Emily squealed and pointed to the swings. " Oh! I'm going to swing! Are you coming."6
Katie started walking and tripped on her shoe lace. " Go ahead of me. I will be on in a second."7
So Emily skipped along and Katie bent down. As she was tying her shoe she felt someone behind her. Her heart started to race and she was shaking. She slowly turned her head and looked behind her. A person in a back cloak with his head covered stood in front of her. To shocked to scream she just sat frozen as the guy bent down and had his face in hers. He brought up his hand. When his sleeve moved down a little she screamed as she saw white figures. With no flesh on them at all. He brought his "fingers" to her cheek and....8
Katie's eye opened and Emily's face was right in hers. Katie sat up and Emily said "What happened. I heard you scream and then you fainted? And you have these weird 3 scratches on your face. i cleaned of all the blood."9
Katie brought her shaking hand up too her face and felt 3 deep scratches. "Umm...I saw a mouse and i fainted. I must have fell on a rock or something." She made up.10
Emily nodded as if she did not fully believe and said " OK. Well, lets just get you home."11
When they got back they both went straight asleep. Well. At least Emily did. Every time Katie closed her eyes she saw the eyes of that guy. Just staring at her. Or was it not a guy. But really a thing? She shook these thoughts out of her head and finally fell asleep.12
The next morning Katie woke up. As she walked into her bathroom to brush her teeth she looked in the mirror. She was paler then usual. "Must be from the lack of sleep last night." She mumbled.13
But the next day when she woke up she was a ghostly pale with circles around under her eyes. She ignored it though. Thinking she was sick. 14
The third day was just weird. When she looked in the mirror her face and body were skinner alot skinner. In her face her cheek bones were showing. She lifted up her shirt and gasped as her ribs were popped out. It seemed as if one more stretch her skin would rip. She looked back in the mirror and stared at her eyes. She blinked a few times as she felt her eyes watering. She thought it was just tears but she was wrong.15
She stopped blinking and screamed as blood slipped from the corners of her eyes. She howled in pain as if felt like someone was ripping her eye balls out of the sockets. Her skin started too burn. It started to peel. As if someone pulled all her skin off her. Her skin started peeling. Breaking, and finally all her skin fell off like a snake shedding it's old skin. 16
But she was not getting any knew skin. The same painful effect happened with her muscles. Katie screamed as her eyes popped out of her shockers and blood poured from them and her mouth. Once she was stripped from every thing she was just a skeleton. She was still alive. Until her organs all collapsed and exploded. The last of her blood finally pored out between her bones and she collapsed. On the cold tile floor lay bloodied skin, her cloths, lots of blood, and of course. Her skeleton. 17
Moral of story: Don't go out at night. Or the Skeleton man will turn you into what Katie died from. And your skin being peeled off your body is not the way i want to spend my Friday night.18
Author notes
If you hate blood. Don't read. If your don't like gory stuff. Don't read. Otherwise enjoy!
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Comments
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i loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was sooooo cool and you should make it in to a book!
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that was freaky! i will not go out alone anymore
... you have scared me...
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Holy. Shit. This is bloody awesome!!! I LOVE IT. Hee hee hee. I'm always out on a Friday night... in the dark... on the swings... you've got me all paranoid now!! LOL!!
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hahaha, this is so funny!!!! great job!!!

