"We have told you that they are skum! SKUM! Yet you continue to follow around with them?"1
"James is pureblood, why don't you approve of him?"2
"BLOOD TRAITERS! We've told you before, you hear Kreacher tell you, he's a filthy BLOOD TRAITER! Never, never have I heard of a Black walking around with a BLOOD TRAITER such as him!" Mrs. Black swirled around to walk out the door, but turned back just as she was leaving,3
"Your brother is in the right place, and The Dark Lord will be forever grateful for him, but you, you are DISPICIBAL!" She huffed and left the room storming with rage. Sirius' hands were shaking so bad that he was seriously worried he was having a sezuire. 4
He ran upstairs at full speed once he was sure his mother had left and swung into the vacant room where he kept his things. He grabbed them quickly and took out a mirror and stared in it. 5
Moments later a face appeared on other side, as if it was a window and someone was sitting beneath it.6
"Sirius, it's 3 in the morning, what's the matter that you had to call on me at this hour?" The face asked him.7
"I'm coming to live with you James, is that okay?" The face looked up at him in bewilderment.8
"Yeah, that's okay, my parents love you, 'member? But next time you run away, try to tell me before hand or something, okay mate?" Sirius was smiling wildly at James and stuffed the mirror in his trunk. He picked it up with unknown strengh and slipped it out of the room, down the stairs and outside.9
He guessed that James can tell a message pretty quick, because just at the corner of the street was his father signling the Knight Bus.10
"Oh, there you are Sirius, James told me and I came down to get you right away. Can't have you roaming the streets with a trunk load of wizirding items all alone can we?" Sirius laughed, James' dad was always so understanding.11
A large bus flew down and a young woman stepped out of it, "Hello, welcome to the..." But Mr. Potter cut her off, "Yeah, yeah, yeah, the Knight bus, blah blah!" He handed over some money and got on, followed by Sirius.12
Sirius sat down smiling, but that grin slipped off his face right away when he saw the look on Mr. Potter's face.13
Sirius looked at him curiously, he looked angry, which was odd, had someone affended him?14
"Sirius, we'll keep you, for now. But I don't appreciate you throwing yourself out of a home and stealing what we have. One bad influence on James and I'll have and excuse, then, your gone!"15
Author notes
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Comments
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I loved it.


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Whoa... kinda moves a bit fast. I like your take on this choice of topic, but I think that you could do so much more with it. Flesh it out.. add some description. Still I think you've done a wonderful job with what you have written so far, so don't take my criticism personally. I feel that you have the talent to do more.... that is all.
Applaud.
Maab
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I love harry potter, and I think this was a really good story for it. I like how at the end Jame's dad was all like, not nice to Sirius, even though it seems like he would be. This is an interesting po int of veiw and I think you should keep writing mroe!!
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Hmmmm intresting. Its a cool idea of having Sirus run from home, when after all that is what Harry does in the POA. The sinister twist on James's dad is good too, makes me want to know if James's dad was mean to Sirus or what. I'v always woundered about Harry's grandparents. The author never really goes into them more then to say that Harry's aunt always felt they loved her sister more for being a witch. Good write!
Bowie.

