Suicide V (the final chapter)

I've hired someone to help me finish1

(make sure i don't chicken out)2

for if they did3

it would not be a suicide4

i saw off my legs 5

now an arm6

one last thing 7

for i cant take my other8

i must finish the job9

i decapitate myself10

and from outside my body11

i watch me12

as i lie there13

agony fills my soul14

as i travel to hell 15

to burn eternally...16

and so has ended the final chapter17

of my death 18

goodbye to you19

for this i make20

-my suicide-21

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  • Homicidal Maniac
    January 22, 2006
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    awwwwww i just read all of them!! thats really sad. i mean its really powerful emotions and feeling but still pretty sad. its just my kind of poem. good job i like it

    _Penny_