9 year old Dakota Langley is a quiet boy who would rather spend his day in a quiet room reading a book than playing ball with his friends. Maybe that is because he never had any. Dakota was born premature and was still very small for his age, he and his mother moved to a new town almost every year to try and find him some friends.. finally he had thought he found one. Trenton Myers was a bully at school, he lived in one of the biggest crack houses on the street and Dakota just happened to be his new neighbor. Trenton promised Dakota that he would protect him from other bullies if he could come to his house after school everyday and Dakota could help him with his homework. Dakota agreed. Not knowing what to expect... Dakota thought that he had found the friend he had been looking for but he was wrong. 1
Author notes
This isnt very long, but I will work on it over time I suppose!
Love,
Kid 
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Joy, this is cool. I love it!! Aww a little kid. lol! Keep up the great writing. Love, Alyssa
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I hope you will work on it, cause it sounds interestin and I would like to read more. You could be more descriptive so we could connect better with dakota and feel with him.
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Ohhhh!!! What next?! What next?! *jumps up and down and claps hands* This has left me in such suspense! Very wonderful prolgue! I loved it. So very inticing!
One thing though... unless you are planning on doing this in the first chapter, maybe more of a description of what Dakota looks like? Just how fragile are we talking? Hair? Eyes? You know. Those things. I can't wait to read more of this!
AmANDA!
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