in the eyes of a soldier

the men marched on... row by row... squadron by squadron... not any expressions appeared faces as they marched throughout the streets.1

"LEFT! LEFT! LEFT! RIGHT! LEFT!" A mans voice beckoned throughout the village, as they marched on. Knowing they just signed their lives away on one piece of paper, to fight for their country. 2

Dogs barked at the men, and children stopped while they were at play.... Everything just seemed to go to an Erie dead silence when the men marched by... Their wives and loved ones stood in the doorway, hanker chief in hand saying farewell to their heroic husbands.... More and more men fell in to another squadron. It was so heroic, with all the different commands being yelled out... 3

Suddenly an explosion blew up the nearest tavern... I could hear the rifles being fired in the distance... but why? this wasn't supposed to happen here, what about our families? 4

"PREPARE YOUR WEAPONS MEN!!" with this one command everyone knew that....5

......................its time for war.........................6

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  • Hunnie Baby Luvvs
    February 25, 2006
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    good

    rachael omg this was soo good you're such a good writer. any ur very talented. keep on writin!-your friend always amber


  • ForgottenxMe
    January 28, 2006
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    short... i like this.. it would be great if you went on with it... well sorry it took me so long to comment.
    ~nerny