A Vampire Kiss

A Vampire Kiss by Reb1531

     Rain watched the night sky and wondered if there really were vampires. People talked about it but no one ever saw one and if they did they would go missing.2

      'I wish to find.' whispered Rain into the night sky3

He heard her sweet voice drift to his ear, while he fed on the weak. He wanted to make her his. He wanted to feel her body and let her know that she was loved. 4

      'I will come for you.' answered Hunter5

She heard it in the wind. His voice was string but beautiful, it was almost like she could picture him out. The trees rustled and washed over the night air. Rain seeked for him in the air and on the ground but no sign of him. Rain was in-circled by strong arms. She was spun around to look into the eyes of a handsome vampire. Hunter lifted her chin and planted a sweet kiss onto her lips. 6

      'I'm yours to the end.' smiled Rain7

Hunter pushed the hair back from her neck and kissed it softly. Her planted feathery kisses on her neck. She felt in when he sank his fangs into her neck. You couldn't tell but she blushed. That night they shared their love and Rain was his forever.8

     'I love you.'  whispered Rain9

     'I love you too, my dear.' answered Hunter back10

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Hope you like it. I tried by best.
Lots of Love,
Becca

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  • Reb153
    January 5, 2006
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    Thank you so much for th comment. Im glad you liked it.
    Lots of Love,
    Becca


  • BlackBloodyRose
    January 5, 2006
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    very good

    very good hard to undrestand but very good!