A new world

THERE WILL BE A NEW WORLD ONE DAY1

A WORLD WITH PEACE AND HARMONY2

A WORLD WERE YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY3

A WORLD WITHOUT FEAR,OR CRIME4

A WORLD WITHOUT PAIN OR DEATH5

A WORLD WHERE NO ONE LIES ALL THE TIME6

THERE WILL BE A NEW WORLD ONE DAY7

A WORLD WERE EVERY ONE IS HAPPY8

AND NOT JEALOUS9

A WORLD WERE YOU CAN BE YOURSELF 10

AND NOT SOMEONE ELSE11

A WORLD WERE EVERY ONE LOVES GOOD12

AND NOT BAD13

A WORLD WERE YOU CAN BE HAPPY ALL THE TIME14

AND NOT SAD15

THERE WILL BE A NEW WORLD ONE DAY16

I TELL YOU THIS17

SO DO GOOD IN THIS HORRIBLE WORLD18

AND THIS WILL BE THE WORLD YOU WON'T MISS19

Author notes

PLEASE TELL ME THE TRUTH ABOUT MY POEM, ABOUT WHAT YOU THINK.THIS IS MY FIRST TIME ON STORYWRITE AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT EVERY BODY THINK OF THIS

     THANX

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  • melonie74
    February 3, 2006
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    AWesome!!!

    I am looking forward too it Thank You.And thanks for reading my work. *o)