It's over

As she stands there waiting for him, her heart starts to beat faster, her hands start to sweat, she closes her eyes listening to her surroundings, this is it she thinks, the last time she has to feel his skin agaisn't hers, her heart thumping agaisnt her rib cage, it was time, what seemed like a lifetime she finally heard his footsteps climbing the stairs, and she sensed his hand grasping the door handle, she raises the atheme while the door opened slowly, she jumped out and plunged the dagger, right into his heart, he roared out in pain and slumped down to the floor, she watched as he bleed, his eyes staring back at her, it was over, she sighed and walked out of the room, it was over1

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ok my friends say there's something seriously wrong with me writting this, maybe it wasn't a good idea to show this to them, oh well xsighsx please leave a comment, you know you want to ^_^ it'll be my birthday persent even though my birthdays not until may but still.... pretty please???

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  • MarkusKaiMarellus silver member
    May 16, 2006
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    suprising

    i loved it it started out like a love story and turned around into vengance i love it "as she opened the door and plunged a dagger into his heart" i love it keep it up

    overall: 7.