EPOLOGE1
THROUGH MY EYES2
And so here we are. In a cathedral with a notorious vampire and his fledglings. This is my story. I short one to be told. I suppose over time it will grow and become more of what everyone wants. But this was not written for the rest of the world quite yet. Right now this is for Lestat. I feel like he has let himself become this way because of the way his fledglings have portrayed him. 3
This is for him and for us, his fledglings, all of us. Louis, Gabrielle, Claudia, Nicolas, David, and for me. We are all part of him. He made us what we are for many different reasons. But he loves us all. We will always be connected to him, and he will always love us. 4
This is for our dark prince, for our perfect devil, for our Lestat. The one that has gone into the sun and survived. The one that has become famous for his music. And the one that always did as he pleased. This is for you my dear sweet Lestat. No longer are you the villain of the story.5
Author notes
this is the last chapter in my story. i hope youall found it enjoying.
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actually this is just the first chapter of the short storie i worte please read them and tell me what you think i would really appricate it. thanks for the comment and the applaud.
blessed be
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This reminds me a whole lot of Anne Rice's: Interview With The Vampire! I enjoyed this; although in the 2nd paragraph you could use another word for loved. It sounds to repetitive... how about something like cherished? I loved how you were trying to portray such a wonderful vampire into something of your own. I am a big fan of vampires, perhaps you could write your own story? Good job and keep writing!!!
Edited on Jan 09, 7:40 p.m. because 'mispelled word, typos...'. -
Hey, this sounds like something from Queen of the Damned. Cool! I really like this write. Keep up the amazing work!
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