No one heard her screams,there was no one to help her1
She was all alone,only quiet and darkness2
Who could hear?In a dream, where no one3
And yet be so aware, be so awake4
Fear,in a nightmare, in your head somewhere5
It's not possible!People don't wake up6
Knowing where they are,or how they got there!7
"So where am I", darkness looming8
"If you don't stop what your doing,9
your going to kill yourself"10
She hears this voice, not a voice, her own11
And the screams not screams, in her head12
"I love you",she whispered tearfully13
"I just want you to be happy"14
"Awake now,awake now, from your dread"15
And she awoke, out of her nightmare16
She hung her head,her long hair concealing her eyes,17
As well as the rest of her expression,18
She hoped so anyways, still shaken by the darkness19
Never again to fear, as she heard angel wings20
Author notes
I used a few lines, was inspired to write ..
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Comments
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Nice job on this - pity it was written as a poem though when this is a short story contest, but that asied you put a couple of hte options in together nicely, and i really did like the ending of it - very 'haunting' - good luck in the contest.
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hey, good luck hehe...that is an awesome poem, i agree...its very mysterious, thats good...that would be a good idea for a short story
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aww i loved it! awesome job.
Lylyanna -
very nice, dark and mysterious. Your lines fit in well with this piece that you chose. I like this a lot, good luck in my contest!
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