She walked into the empty space, seeing how much she missed him so. His things were gone, out of sight. "Don't cry."she said to herself. Amy really wanted to believe that everything would work out between them. But would it really work out? Or were those just hopeful thinking. She knew the real answer to that. She wouldn't tell anyone, she really mostly kept her feelings locked up inside in a tight box with a key she only held. Amy went in a corner of the room and curled herself into a ball and cried her eyes out. Never, she thought, would she ever love so blindly again. Never, never in a million years would she love like she did for anyone. It was a promise she just could not keep.1
Author notes
like it is titled, it's just an intro, to get you readers intrested. If you are, I think I'll continue it. Please put in some input so I can figure out if I should or not. Thanks!
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What a powerful beginning. That guy should be shot. I have to meet this guy to talk to him personally. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I hope the guy dies. Excellent intro, I bet the rest of the story will just be as good as the intro.
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it, I will try and make the first chapter as good as this one. Thanks again!
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Great!!!!!!!!!
wow! but you gotta wonder who is the real'amy' and who is this one who broke her heart??? -
awwwwwww this is soooo sweet! I can totally relate to this in a million ways!!!
Amy went in a corner of the room and curled herself into a ball and cried her eyes out. Never, she thought, would she ever love so blindly again. Never, never in a million years would she love like she did for anyone. It was a promise she just could not keep.
I've been through a situation similar to this before, and that part is so beautifully written!! This is a good write! I really really like this.
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