Clone (working title)

This is one story idea that I couldn't get anywhere with. I was thinking of scraping it, when I saw this, so I thought that maybe you could od something with it.1

Overview - There's two really main characters, Rachel and Jessica. Rachel is not popular, and is shunned in their school (they're in middle school). Jessica is popular and everyone adores her. She's also part of a crowd that likes to tease 'lesser' kids, non-popular kids. They tease Rachel all the time, but they don't focus on her much, because there are kids they can make fun of more. then, all of a sudden, they decide to move in on her, and make her life hell. One thing though, Rachel looks exactl like Jessica. Well, aside from Jessica wearing designer clothes and make-up. Jessica starts to feel bad for Rachel. Will she takes sides with Rachel or continue to tease her? That's for you to decide. (oh yeah, and either way you decide, neither Rachel or Jessica knows that they're actually twins.)2

I didn't really have much on this at all. I made Rachel and Jessica to have red hair and hazel eyes, but I didn't do any real personality things. And all I did was put names to their friends (Rachel doesn't have many, and one of them decides to be friends with Jessica instead). So you have tons of freedom with it. I thought of the title before thining of the plot, so now it's a working title. I don't like it too much anymore. My brother was talking to me about cloning so the title popped into my head. I planned what I have like, 4 years ago, then tucked the notebook away and forgot about it. If you wish to work on it, go right ahead. I can't think of anything to do with it.3

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  • twinklestart
    January 3, 2006
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    well, it's not exactly cloning. jessica and rachel are twins, and they look almost identical so people could call her a clone or something.

  • Jinxgirl
    January 3, 2006
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    hmm, an interesting idea. I think a lot could happen with this plot. I have never read a story about cloning so this might be interesting to try. thanks for entering!