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Yuna sat silently waiting for Tidus to return. She sat and sat but he never showed. She didn't understand why he was doing this to her. He told her that he loved her and it didn't show.2

  'Miss are you ok?' asked a waitress3

  'Yes, I'm leaving right now.' replied young Yuna4

Yuna grabbed her staff and walked out into the cold, icy rain. Her hair was matted down and her robes were soaked completely through. The moon was he only light to get back home. Oh... how she missed Tidus's loving embrace. 5

She walked for hours when she heard someone behind her. 6

   'You didn't wait.' Tidus answered coldly7

   'I didn't think you were coming.' replied the wet Yuna8

He got closer to her to his love. All he wanted was to hold her in his arms and make her believe that he really loved her. 9

   'Hold me please.' cried Yuna10

Tidus grabbed her and held her wet form against his body. Their hearts beat in a rapid rhythm. He lifted her chin and passionately kissed her. The rain kept falling but it didn't feel as cold. They walked home togther hand in hand. That night Tidus made her his for all eternity. 11

   'I love you.' Tidus ad Yuna said to each other12

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Hope you all like it.
Lots of Love,
Becca

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