The 7 Shadow Riders; the First Encounter (Part -1)

(Starting inside the castle, in the main hallway)1

Original Ice Lord2

We are under attack, and our people are being killed!3

Original Shadow Lord4

I know it's Shaw Lo, and his warriors.5

He wants the time keys that we keep in the castle, so he can go back in time and destroy our powers. So no one will be able to stop him, in this, or any other time.6

Original Ice Lord7

I sent the other riders to go fight. (Showing the other riders leaving the castle, Night Hawk is in the air, and the others are on horseback.)8

Original Night Hawk9

We need a plan to stop Shaw Lo. 10

Original Shadow Serpent11

This is bad; never had this much trouble with Shaw Lo before. He has gotten more power from somewhere, and found more people to control and to fight for him. Even really good people are helping him. (They show Shaw Lo riding a horse, and holding the book of Funraw.)12

Original Night Hawk13

Shadow Serpent, you take Shadow Fighter and go take out the right flank. Inferno, you take Striker, and take out the left flank. I will take the middle. (A big battle takes place and the riders are seen being killed in a noble fight.)14

(Go to 3 minute commercial)15

(Coming back from break, show the inside of Shadow Lord's castle.)16

Original Shadow Lord17

I'm going to summon Pyron to put up a fire barrier to protect the castle. But I don't know how long he can hold out. You go and call the others back. (Ice Lord channels her powers to lock onto the other riders.)18

Original Ice Lord19

I can't feel the others powers anymore; I think they have been defeated. You are the only ones left. 20

(Showing Shaw Lo at the castle gates, with two guards at his feet.)21

Shaw Lo22

Do you really think your dragon will be able to stop me? "Shinraw, Danftah!" (The fire wall goes down, and Shaw Lo goes into the castle.)23

Original Ice Lord24

(Ice Lord meets Shaw Lo in the main hall.) Where do you think you're going? (Shaw Lo pushes her aside with a wave of his hand, and continues to go to the Key chamber.)25

Original Shadow Lord26

You will go no further, Shaw Lo.27

Shaw Lo28

Who's going to stop me? With my powers as strong as they are, you don't stand a chance against me.29

Original Shadow Lord30

We will see.31

(The fight resumes between Shaw Lo and Shadow Lord. Shaw Lo jumps into the air.)32

Shaw Lo33

Dark Panther attack! (A fighter charges Shadow Lord, causing him to turn around to defend himself.) You fool! You should never have turned your back on me. (Shaw Lo summons a force ball and sends it at Shadow Lord, bringing him to his knees. But as Shaw Lo is about to finish him off, Shadow Lord casts a spell that tears open a tunnel to a planet, sending Shaw Lo and his fighters to Dark World. And then, he dies.) (The Soul Sword then sends the crest back to the cave where they had been found.)34

(As this happens, Michael wakes up in a cold sweat. He looks up and sees a light hovering over him. It starts to move closer to him, and then heads for the door.)35

(Go to 3 minute commercial)36

Michael37

What was that? I've never seen anything like that before! (Michael gets out of bed and runs after the light.) I have to find out what that light was, and what it was doing here! (Showing Michael running through a forest. The light takes him to a dark cave.) I wonder why it has brought me to this place? (Michael goes inside to look around. A pit of black fire comes out of the ground, and the crest surrounding it appears. Then the Soul Sword emerges from the fire.) I wonder if it is safe to touch it? (He picks up the sword. The light then proceeds to open the cases that are holding the crest in them, and charges them up.)38

(Show a hill outside, with Wolf standing on it.)39

....To be continued

Author notes

If you want to read the rest of this, check out part 2 of the script. This is something I came up with on my own. It goes with the Keys of Time, a story I had posted awhile back. If you like how the script sounds so far, check out part 2 to see how it ends.

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  • CedricDempNQ2
    January 12, 2006
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    Attention gripping

    Interesting and attention gripping. Bit odd describing Ice Lord (female) as a lord though. Also, didn't think the color scheme was quite the best. Very light colored type against a white background is a bit difficult to read.

  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    December 30, 2005
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    Wow! Robin, this is soooooo great! Very clever, and terribly inventive! This story is just fabulous! You pulled me along into it; I can't wait to get to the 2nd part, to see what comes next! You've obviously thought out the plot really well, right down to showing where things were taking place, who was speaking, and even the breaks for commercials! Fabulous work, here! Now you just need to get this into the right hands, and very shortly, every kid in the country will know who Shadow Lord, Ice Lord, and Shaw Lo are! Great work!
    Paula