Olivia leaned against the wall in her apartment, staring at the small Christmas tree that twinkled on the coffee table. It was only twenty inches tall, and had a single strand of multi color lights wrapped around it with a few ornaments. Beneath it, there were no presents. It was times like these that the loneliness began to set in. She turned up the cup of egg nog and then looked out the window of her New York apartment. Cars drove by, honking loudly. People who had places to go, but the only place she had to go was work. Usually, work was enough but not today. She picked up the remote, and started to flip on her tv when the door bell rung. Olivia stood up and walked over to the door, using the small peep hole to see who was outside. She had been a detective long enough to know, never open the door without looking.1
Her face scrunched up in confusion when she saw her partner, Elliot Stabler, outside. She opened the door and smiled when he walked inside. “So, what brings you here?” Closing her door, she turned to him.2
Elliot shrugged, “Kathy and I had another fight.” He shook his head, shoving his hands into his pockets. Elliot was dressed casually, unlike on days he worked. He wore a pair of jeans and a blue hoodie. “It’s Christmas, and all she wants to do is start something. I just… I had to get away from there.”3
“Sorry,” Olivia reached her hand out and touched Elliot’s arm. “You’re welcome to stay here as long as you want to. Although, I doubt I will be much company.”4
Elliot smiled, his eyes scanning over Olivia in her pale pink, silken nightgown. “You look cute; I can imagine you arresting someone in that.”5
Rolling her eyes, Olivia made a face at him. “Very funny, and it’s not like I was expecting company.”6
“I can tell.” He turned, noticing her small tree. “So, this is what you do for Christmas?”7
“Yeah,” shrugging, she started to walk towards the kitchen. “I’m use to spending it alone. You want something to drink?”8
Elliot followed Olivia into her kitchen and watched her as she fumbled with the coffee pot. “Actually, that’s not why I came here.” He stepped directly behind Olivia and grabbed her around the waist. “There’s something that… I’ve wanted to do for a very long time.”9
Olivia turned and Elliot captured her mouth in a kiss. A timid kiss at first, becoming more passionate as he pulled her to him. His hands slid down her back, his tongue ravishing her mouth as he slipped it between her open lips, exploring and tasting. She tasted of egg nog with a hint of peppermint. He groaned against her lips when she began to return the kiss. Elliot lifted her on to the counter top, his hand slipping beneath her gown. Olivia gasped when his hand pressed against her panties. 10
Elliot pulled her panties down, tossing them on to the floor. He reached down, grabbing his zipper and freeing himself in one quick movement as he pushed his jeans and underwear down. Olivia looked down, her eyes wide at the size of what lay between his legs. He was already erect, and his manhood stood nearly nine inches. Elliot pressed against her, capturing her lips once more. His finger stroked her clit, making sure she was wet enough to handle him. He positioned himself in front of her and thrust inside of her. Olivia cried out, bracing her hands on his shoulders as he plunged inside of her. She closed her eyes, leaning her head back when the overwhelming feeling of pleasure engulfed her body. She could feel herself being stretched by him, and god she wanted more. Elliot leaned forward, his lips suckling her neck. His hands worked to pull the nightgown over her head. She quickly helped him to remove her gown and threw it on to the counter. He nipped at the skin of her neck, moving lower until his full lips wrapped around her engorged nipples. Soft, pink mounds of flesh. Flesh that he had only dreamed of commanding until now. 11
Olivia tugged at his shirt, and he released her nipple just long enough for her to strip it from his body. His mouth immediately sought out the pink buds once more. He rammed his cock harder inside of her, causing her entire body to rise up from the counter. She dug her fingernails into his back, arching herself forward. Elliot’s squeezed her breasts with his hands, kneading them slowly. Olivia gasped loudly when several waves of pleasure escalated throughout her body. Her body trembled. She dug deeper into his back as a powerful orgasm rippled through her entire body, making her shiver with ecstasy. Elliot grunted. The pent up sexual tension between the two of them finally coming to a head as he slammed inside of her once more, spilling every drop of his seed deep within her. They both were sweating, their breathing heavy. Collapsing into his arms, Olivia laid her head against his chest. 12
After several moments, she pulled back and looked up at him. “Oh god, this… this shouldn’t have happened. You’re married and…”13
Elliot captured her face, placing his hand in her silky red hair. He had grown limber, but had not yet pulled out of her. “Olivia, that’s what I came here to tell you. I’m filing for a divorce. I can’t keep pretending to love Kathy. Do you realize Kathy and I haven’t made love since the day she got pregnant with Eli? It hasn’t been the same between us and… there are days I still wonder if he is even my child.”14
Olivia met Elliot’s eyes, staring up at him. The passion still filled her brown eyes as she spoke in a shaky voice. “What are you saying?” 15
“I’m saying that I love you. I have loved you for… oh god, a long time.” He smiled at her, his fingers rubbing her cheek. “You have no idea what seeing you every day, bent over my desk done to me.”16
She laughed, glancing down to where they were still joined. She could feel that he was already growing inside of her again. Grinning, she looked up. “I think I can imagine.”17
A flush passed over his checks, “Sorry, I can’t help that looking at you turns me into an animal.” He laughed, kissing her neck. “I have wanted to be with you like this for so long. Please, tell me I wasn’t imagining that you wanted this too?”18
Olivia gasped, feeling his semi-erection pressing into her. She leaned towards him, capturing his mouth with hers. “You weren’t imagining it. Oh god El, I have fantasized about you so many times.” She pressed her lips against his cheek, whispering. “I love you.”19
He smiled. His hands sliding slowly down the smooth skin of her back. “I’ve dreamed of hearing you say that.”20
She grinned, “I’ve dreamed of you making mad passionate love to me.”21
Laughing, he pulled back to look at her. Grinning, when he realized they were in the kitchen. “Oh, I think I did that, considering we’re in the kitchen.”22
She laughed, trailing a finger over his chest with desire. “My bedroom is down the hall. That is, if you’re up for… round two. By the feel of things, I would say that’s a yes.”23
He grinned, his erection stiffening again inside of her as he groaned. “Oh that’s a yes. That is, if I can make it to the bedroom without doing you again right here.”24
“You don’t see me complaining do you?” She suckled his earlobe with a giggle. 25
Elliot laughed, letting himself slowly slip from within her. It took every ounce of will power he had not to explode as he shaft slid from within her moist flesh. Olivia trembled, the emptiness making her groan in despair. He lifted her from the counter, embracing her entire body into his arms. They both laughed when he became tangled in his jeans, nearly tripping in the floor. He carried her down the hallway and to her bedroom, laying her carefully down on the sheets for round two...
Her face scrunched up in confusion when she saw her partner, Elliot Stabler, outside. She opened the door and smiled when he walked inside. “So, what brings you here?” Closing her door, she turned to him.2
Elliot shrugged, “Kathy and I had another fight.” He shook his head, shoving his hands into his pockets. Elliot was dressed casually, unlike on days he worked. He wore a pair of jeans and a blue hoodie. “It’s Christmas, and all she wants to do is start something. I just… I had to get away from there.”3
“Sorry,” Olivia reached her hand out and touched Elliot’s arm. “You’re welcome to stay here as long as you want to. Although, I doubt I will be much company.”4
Elliot smiled, his eyes scanning over Olivia in her pale pink, silken nightgown. “You look cute; I can imagine you arresting someone in that.”5
Rolling her eyes, Olivia made a face at him. “Very funny, and it’s not like I was expecting company.”6
“I can tell.” He turned, noticing her small tree. “So, this is what you do for Christmas?”7
“Yeah,” shrugging, she started to walk towards the kitchen. “I’m use to spending it alone. You want something to drink?”8
Elliot followed Olivia into her kitchen and watched her as she fumbled with the coffee pot. “Actually, that’s not why I came here.” He stepped directly behind Olivia and grabbed her around the waist. “There’s something that… I’ve wanted to do for a very long time.”9
Olivia turned and Elliot captured her mouth in a kiss. A timid kiss at first, becoming more passionate as he pulled her to him. His hands slid down her back, his tongue ravishing her mouth as he slipped it between her open lips, exploring and tasting. She tasted of egg nog with a hint of peppermint. He groaned against her lips when she began to return the kiss. Elliot lifted her on to the counter top, his hand slipping beneath her gown. Olivia gasped when his hand pressed against her panties. 10
Elliot pulled her panties down, tossing them on to the floor. He reached down, grabbing his zipper and freeing himself in one quick movement as he pushed his jeans and underwear down. Olivia looked down, her eyes wide at the size of what lay between his legs. He was already erect, and his manhood stood nearly nine inches. Elliot pressed against her, capturing her lips once more. His finger stroked her clit, making sure she was wet enough to handle him. He positioned himself in front of her and thrust inside of her. Olivia cried out, bracing her hands on his shoulders as he plunged inside of her. She closed her eyes, leaning her head back when the overwhelming feeling of pleasure engulfed her body. She could feel herself being stretched by him, and god she wanted more. Elliot leaned forward, his lips suckling her neck. His hands worked to pull the nightgown over her head. She quickly helped him to remove her gown and threw it on to the counter. He nipped at the skin of her neck, moving lower until his full lips wrapped around her engorged nipples. Soft, pink mounds of flesh. Flesh that he had only dreamed of commanding until now. 11
Olivia tugged at his shirt, and he released her nipple just long enough for her to strip it from his body. His mouth immediately sought out the pink buds once more. He rammed his cock harder inside of her, causing her entire body to rise up from the counter. She dug her fingernails into his back, arching herself forward. Elliot’s squeezed her breasts with his hands, kneading them slowly. Olivia gasped loudly when several waves of pleasure escalated throughout her body. Her body trembled. She dug deeper into his back as a powerful orgasm rippled through her entire body, making her shiver with ecstasy. Elliot grunted. The pent up sexual tension between the two of them finally coming to a head as he slammed inside of her once more, spilling every drop of his seed deep within her. They both were sweating, their breathing heavy. Collapsing into his arms, Olivia laid her head against his chest. 12
After several moments, she pulled back and looked up at him. “Oh god, this… this shouldn’t have happened. You’re married and…”13
Elliot captured her face, placing his hand in her silky red hair. He had grown limber, but had not yet pulled out of her. “Olivia, that’s what I came here to tell you. I’m filing for a divorce. I can’t keep pretending to love Kathy. Do you realize Kathy and I haven’t made love since the day she got pregnant with Eli? It hasn’t been the same between us and… there are days I still wonder if he is even my child.”14
Olivia met Elliot’s eyes, staring up at him. The passion still filled her brown eyes as she spoke in a shaky voice. “What are you saying?” 15
“I’m saying that I love you. I have loved you for… oh god, a long time.” He smiled at her, his fingers rubbing her cheek. “You have no idea what seeing you every day, bent over my desk done to me.”16
She laughed, glancing down to where they were still joined. She could feel that he was already growing inside of her again. Grinning, she looked up. “I think I can imagine.”17
A flush passed over his checks, “Sorry, I can’t help that looking at you turns me into an animal.” He laughed, kissing her neck. “I have wanted to be with you like this for so long. Please, tell me I wasn’t imagining that you wanted this too?”18
Olivia gasped, feeling his semi-erection pressing into her. She leaned towards him, capturing his mouth with hers. “You weren’t imagining it. Oh god El, I have fantasized about you so many times.” She pressed her lips against his cheek, whispering. “I love you.”19
He smiled. His hands sliding slowly down the smooth skin of her back. “I’ve dreamed of hearing you say that.”20
She grinned, “I’ve dreamed of you making mad passionate love to me.”21
Laughing, he pulled back to look at her. Grinning, when he realized they were in the kitchen. “Oh, I think I did that, considering we’re in the kitchen.”22
She laughed, trailing a finger over his chest with desire. “My bedroom is down the hall. That is, if you’re up for… round two. By the feel of things, I would say that’s a yes.”23
He grinned, his erection stiffening again inside of her as he groaned. “Oh that’s a yes. That is, if I can make it to the bedroom without doing you again right here.”24
“You don’t see me complaining do you?” She suckled his earlobe with a giggle. 25
Elliot laughed, letting himself slowly slip from within her. It took every ounce of will power he had not to explode as he shaft slid from within her moist flesh. Olivia trembled, the emptiness making her groan in despair. He lifted her from the counter, embracing her entire body into his arms. They both laughed when he became tangled in his jeans, nearly tripping in the floor. He carried her down the hallway and to her bedroom, laying her carefully down on the sheets for round two...
Author notes
Okay, I wrote this a few weeks ago and had thought of continuing. So far, I haven't. I decided to just post this part though and see what everyone thinks. It's a fan fiction based from my favorite tv show; Law And Order: SVU. I usually don't write fan fictions, but this one came in my head one night.
Comments please...? :)
Comments
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Never watched law and order, but yes, passionate and draws your readers in. It was interesting, good descriptions.
A grammer mistake:
- end of Ph11: you repeat "flesh" twice.
Overall, great job
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ohh ive watched a couple of law n order episodes i think....this was an interesting perspective of the characters! very well written..quite passionate...good work!



