is it a dream or was it real

you wake up on x-mass day and find your self on your knee's in tears 1

how to explain to your kid's what happened to x-mass2

will they forgive you or will they hate you?3

it's the night of sharing not lying4

why do people do thing's that mess up the best day of the year for our kid's and why5

am i the one to suffer for it6

i try to explain what happened but to my surprise my son told me dad 7

plz don't cry Sana told me that he'll be hear later tonight and not to worry.8

i don't want my son to see my cry 9

at least of don't want him to think i was scared i know their was 5 men that broke in but their had to be something i could of done10

so plz tell me I'm dreaming or at least tell my son i love him.11

as time went on and night became day12

the 5 men returned to crime13

the biggest in tears the smallest one in a chair14

i wanted to know why they came back but i was to scared15

but my son soon walked in the room and said dad wake up it's x-mass time16

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  • Not A Pin Up
    January 10, 2006
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    hmmmm this is interesting....its a great poem and i like the emotion behind it...good job

  • Sharkbaitoolala
    December 27, 2005
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    wow this gave me the chills the whole time i was reading it. this is very powerful. thanks for entering and good luck. your son is so luck to have a dad that cares. wish mine was still here.
    LOVE SANDRA