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He sits in his garage wrenching on the old behemoth, knuckles still bloody and sore.  As he sets the wrench down and grabs the rag he notices the picture of his dad sitting there.  He looks at it and remembers all the times they spent together in this same garage working on cars and trucks past.  As he smears the grease over his hands and arms he remember the first thing they built together.  Blood is thicker than water but only gasoline runs in these veins, he steps back and looks at the old truck and thinks of a name.  He thinks of the races past and victories and crashes and as he examines the old truck he puts on his glasses.  Looking her over hood to tailgate he notices a large blemish on her face.  1

“It seems as though this truck has seen better days,” he says.  2

Noticing the large dent in the hood he pondered a name for the old heap.3

“Hrmmmm, what should I call you… I know, you will be Scarface,” he said he in relieved tone.4

Now that she had a name he returned to working on her slowly and carefully he moved the engine hoist into place as he connected the hoist to the intake manifold he remembered the first time he pulled an engine out of a car.  She was an old blue Ford Mustang, someone had beaten her badly.  He remember hooking up the hoist and pulling the tired old 289 out of her shell.  Thinking back he can still smell the mixture of fuel and oil in her oil pan, he remember taking apart the main caps and noticing that the fool who owned the tired car before had spun every connecting rod bearing and even snapped a few connecting rods.  He remembers while cleaning the block the chunks of old solidified oil pushing through the galleys.5

He finishes connecting the hoist to the old trucks tired engine.  He then slides back under the beast to remove the 6 blots that hold her heart in her chest.  As the wrench clicks away removing them slowly 1 from each side at a time he remembers back to the old Mustang.  After cleaning out her block until she was spotless he sent it out to be Magnafluxed to make sure that her old heart still had something left to work with.  To his dismay he had come to find that the foolish previous owner had scorched her so bad that many cracks where found throughout the entirety of her block.  It was impossible to use her old heart for she would certainly perish if he where to rebuild it.    He remembers the countless hours spent figuring out what exactly he was to do with her now.6

The final blots are removed from the truck’s engine mounts.  The old, oil soaked and ragged heart is removed from her shell.  He brings the tired old 351 over to his engine stand and takes a long hard look at it before he begins dis-assembly.7

“Man it is really amazing that this tired old truck has at least one good thing left in her,” he says with delight.8

Certain now that he has something he can work with he begins removing the old components from the engine, remembering the faith filled day when he found an engine that would work for his precious Mustang.9

Rummaging through an old junkyard he noticed a 1996 Ford Explorer sitting by itself in a corner and he remembered someone saying something about the engines being good for some reason, the details where vague at the time because of his youth, and inexperience. He remembered that it had to be an eight cylinder as he ran over and looked sure enough it was the engine he needed.10

As the man pulls the engine oil pan off he look over at the clock realizing how late it is, so he begins to put away his tools and prepare for sleep, as he walks over to the door of the garage to turn out the lights he looks out back at the tarp covered car.  As he walks over to go outside and look at it he glances up and sees the newspaper clipping. 11

“A local drag racer named Jim was in a catastrophic wreck today,” it reads12

He looks over the clipping as it talks about the luck of the driver to have been able to walk away from the wreck and about how much damage was done to the driver’s car. As he starts outside, he hears footsteps fast approaching, as he turns a little boy jumps up in his arms and exclaims,13

“Hey uncle Jim what are you doing?” he says as he pants trying to catch his breath.14

“Hey buddy, nothing really, why don’t you go inside and wait for me.” Jim replies in a soft tone.15

As the boy scurries off into the house Jim walks over to the trap covered car and removes her shroud.  Sure enough it’s his mustang, but it’s also the wrecked car described in the newspaper.16

“Don’t worry baby,” he says softly, “I will never forget the day you spared my life and gave your own.  Don't worry I will rebuild you, that much I promise.”17

As he puts the dark colored tarp back over the twisted Mustang he looks up into the house and sees his brother and sister-in-law, and their two kids in the house waiting for him.  A small crack runs across his face as if he was smiling.18

“Man it is a good sight to see people back in this old house.”  He mutters to himself.19

As a cold breeze blows up on the back of his neck he walks up the short flight of stairs into the house and turns off the lights outside.20

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This is something I wrote a short time ago... This thought is what has helped me get through school and continue to enjoy what I do.

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  • J Rhys Davies
    December 27, 2005
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    This was a very detail oriented piece. It has a great base for a strong story to be able to continue and flourish from it. The only thing is, in a couple spots there are extra words and a little grammatical tweaking that needs to be done. Sometimes a fresh eye sees what we don’t when we write. I miss things all the time in mine. I think it’s because we know what is supposed to be there, and our minds block out the “mistakes” so to speak. All in all, this was a great read.

    ~ John


  • joybug
    December 27, 2005
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    awesome

    Wonderful! A few minor spelling errors, but dang it! You really had my attention. I loved the story. The memories it brought back were awesome. Thank you and bless you. You really have a talent for telling a story--which seems a lost art. Many great stories to come, hoping you write more to this one.

  • Vera Rich
    December 27, 2005
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    May I give you a slight warning... Unless Fords' have changed their policy of late, you may be heading for trouble if you name them or their products in creative work. My magazine MANIFOLD was very nearly sued for publishing a poem which mentioned by name one of Fords' models of car (in a very positive manner, incidentally!). Even though we had permission from their UK subsidiary to use the name, the Detroit head office were extremely unpleasant... and it took much humble grovelling before they agreed not to prosecute... So do be careful!

  • Midnight Lace
    December 27, 2005
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    WoW! This was so much fun to read. I love the way you floated back and forth between past and present. I love how there was so many raw emotions penned into this story. I enjoy watching people work on the older style cars. My oldest brother is in school to become a mechianc and I know this story would be right up his ally. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story. Welcome To Allpoetry I hope you find this place to be a safe and nurturing place to expand your ability and creativity in the writing aspect. Allpoetry as varies classes that you can join to learn the different types of writing. There are contest that are so much fun to enter. I hope that you enjoy the site as much as I have been. Again, Welcome to Allpoetry!
    Midnight Lace
    (aka Christina)

  • Driver X
    December 27, 2005
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    I thank you for your kind words, in all honesty I have a hard time thinking about my feelings let alone writing them down. For you to say the kind things that you have makes me feel very touched.

    -Driver X

  • Touchof1der
    December 26, 2005
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    The detail you have poured out in this story and the way you take us through the step by step paces allows the reader to feel as if they are a bystander. Your writing is well defined with detail, which is always good for holding the readers attention. Nice work!
    ♥ Touchof1der

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