Lost Within...

A  warm day, sunny outside, getting to school, as she ran her hair..which were dead straight, brown and light honey natural highlights here and there were tied in a pony tail as usual. She walked early in the morning. She had to get to school to finish a project she was sure she was the only one that would be up this early...she smiled as she smelled the fresh morning air...ahhhh, what a nice relaxing feeling. As she walked , she saw someone.....familiar, YEAH HELL OF A FAMILIAR PERSON. Hat on the head...jordan's to be specific a white t-shirt with dark blue pants, not jeans, nope not jeans at all. No idea who was behind...there was something bout 'em that had bats doing cartwheels in her stomach. bunny she noticed everything about him, his hands, his hair were jet black and thick.. she was sure he noticed her too. They way he sneaked glances, they both knew but they never said anything. She was crazy for him and she had a hunch he was too. But ahh, what the hell time for some fun...Luckily her backpack was light..may be she could run past him, see his reaction...he was sleepy yes, maybe that would wake him up, eh? Okay time for action but why was it that her hands were shaking and she had to keep encouraging herself. Her hands always shook when she thought about him or had anything to do with him.She got herself ready and ran, she loved running it made her feel free and light. It felt as if her spirit could soar the sky and make her fly. The wind picked up, licking her bangs and swung her ponytail here and there, almost there and she raced past him.....Her eye caught him jerking his head towards her...HA!!! Damn her shoe lace opened......she stopped and sat down to tie it. That woke him up..yup definitely. He was catching up to her, she could tell by the corner of her eye. She finished tying her shoe lace and stood up. The air was still as fresh and cool...she sighed out loud and smiled in contentment. He had caught up with, giving her a quizzical look regarding her sigh. She just smiled in response and shook her head in a negative fashion. She knew he wouldn't talk, it was a matter of pride for him. That was what attracted her to him, it maybe be stupid but yup...she loved his pride. If that was the problem then she would talk, " So , are you involved in the project too?" she asked. "yup, I didn't want to but since it's our final project for English we have to. I hate to wake up early in the mornings." She laughed..."I know what you mean."1

So what do ya think people..should I continue with the love story?2

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So should I continue? ......

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  • UnknowN55
    December 28, 2005
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    THANKS!

  • Grasping for breath
    December 27, 2005
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    great!

    aww! i love it! it made me feel like i was sitting on the sidewalk watching the whole thing! you did a great job with this. and yes i think you should continue the story. you used the same form in writing that i do. many people frown on me for doing do but i love to use a different form than everyone else. once again this was a great write! great job!