i felt like panicking,but i was able to control myself, until i thought of the situation i was in. i was here all alone. In the middle of the night. I had no idea of where i was. I was lost.1
Rosetta's plan started to unfold, but i didn't know if this was the end of it. fury,and anger crept its way into my veins.i started to shake. I was overwhelmed with emotion. my eyes became heavy and i started to cry.2
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I sat there with my hands draped over my face. tears ran down my cheeks, but the warmth made me comfortable. I knew i had to get my mind back together, so i could get out of here.4
After minutes of calming down, i hardly felt that i would be able to walk, but i forced myself. whipping the tears from my face i dragged myself to the door, and opened it.5
the sky was a light purple color, and the moon was at full., which made it easier to see, in the calm night. fear took ahold of me. but i pushed my self forward, and tried tried to think of other things, but i was unable to. I thought of Rosetta, and and anger struck my veins again. I wanted, more than anything to get revenge.6
dragging my feet through the woods i found many trails. I had no idea where they would lead to, and i had no idea which ones I should take. looking at the ground i chose the ones that seemed like they were used the most. After several minutes of walking, i felt my legs beginning to hurt, and my breathing got heavier, with every step i took. so i leaned up against a tree to catch my breath. but before i knew it i was on the ground. I felt my mind begin to turn off.7
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again i was woken by the cold. But now it was even colder. as the morning started to creep its way into the sky, i was filled with hope. "The more light the better" i thought to myself. i arouse from the ground and began walking again9
my eyes were swollen, and my hair was filled with leafs, the sky was getting brighter with every minute that went bye, but the forest was still dark, and it was getting colder as the morning dew set on the ground.10
walking into a clearing i found myself at a small ledge, and near the bottom was a tent.11
right away i knew who it was. all the anger that i felt before came back to me, but as i stood there the anger continued to grow, until i started to shake. I thought of all the things that had happened to me. All the things that Rosetta did to me, and i started to cry yet again. i could feel adrenaline seep through my veins. i felt as if i could explode. The tears began to flow from my eyes faster than i had ever experienced. Anger, with a mix of adrenaline was surging through me. with out thought, i exploded, and ran down the ledge to the tent, i was shaking heavily. as i got to the door of the tent i picked up a large rock and ripped through the door. finding Rosetta i brought the rock down on her head, repeatedly. blood and brains were strewn every where. All i remember was the other two screaming, and trying to exit the tent. i continued to beat her face with the rock until there was nothing left but blood and brains. When i felt the adrenaline leave me, i became tired, and i was still crying. My head became tired, and before i knew it all i could see was black. 12
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well this is the end of life and lies...i think...enjoy
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yay! killing of characters is always fun...this is an interesting end, it was a little rushed but i like it. i like the way it stayed constant, and it was like you were there with her, following her the whole way. this is a good end, very dramatic and it leaves the reader wanting more, well done!
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gr8 story, amazing, i was hooked, shamed its ended, anyway write more stories cos i need it!!!!!!!!!
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a good story. I liked that you hadn't made things at different places. All held in the forest itself. You have really expressed your feelings on injury perfectly. Tough, I found your working of mind repetation and not that influences. Sorry for that, but, as far as mind was connected it wasn't that nice. Else, was wonderful. I was hwever, unable to understand last line, all i could see was black... Were you hurt agian or your emotions jumped on you once agian
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Wow, this is amazing!!!!! Well done!
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damn...haha yay you killed her! this is great, now hurry up with the next story damnit.
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