Story/Plot Line: Gods Assassin. by Ashara at Story write

Ok, i'd like your opinions on this story.. i don't know if i should go ahead and write it or not..1

Plot Line: The Gods Assassin.2

Main Character: 3

Lai. – Lai was originally a Farmers Daughter, but when soldiers came and killed all in her family except for her, she went after them in child’s revenge (she was 12 at the time). But she never caught up to the soldiers. When she fainted in the forest due to exhaustion and dehydration she was visited by a spirit. Who made her health again and gave her two Daggers and a Bow and a quiver of arrows, and the knowledge of how to use them. In return, Lai became an assassin for the gods. The spirit would come to her and tell her who must go into the afterworld, and Lai made it so without question.4

Lai spent 9 years as this occupation. But one day when she was bathing in a waterfall, a nearby noble found her and stole her weapons. As the noble was about to kill her, he noticed her beauty and decided to keep her as a slave instead.5

This is when the story actually starts. With Lai attempting to escape and recover her weapons, for the weapons are extremely dangerous in the hands on the untrained and being God blessed, they also possess certain magical qualities, such as accuracy and the inability to rust or tarnish, as well as other things.6

Other Main Characters:7

*Noble Carman - greedy noble, stole Lai’s weapons and forced her into slavery.8

*Father Dominic - Priest of the order of Isha, the pure god. Finds Lai once she has escaped and offers her shelter.9

*Sister Tara – convert of the order of Isha, the pure God. Is assigned 2 help Lai whilst she is recovering. Is a sensitive and can feel emotions and past memories, even on objects such as clothing and weapons.10

*Mitchell – Older Brother of Tara, works as a builder. Shelters Lai and offers work as payment. Falls in love with Lai and follows after her when she goes to get the weapons back.11

*Spirit – Messenger for the Gods, found Lai. Tells Lai who she must kill and watches over her.12

These are the main characters, other characters may come in.. don’t know yet.13

Will Lai recover the mystical weapons?