I dream in the endless loop of time. 1
Sometimes I feel that if I tell someone about this, they will laugh at me, because they do not believe in what i do, Reincarnation, at others they will turn away from me in disgust, because they do belive in Reincarnation. Now listen, listen to my shame of my life, or at least the past life.2
It is night. The sounds of the spectral night whispers through my ears, as i watch the house in front of me. It is an ancient Japanese house, full of the distinct style that makes it so elagant and attractive.3
I run forward, moving swiftly and quietly through the Bushes.4
There are guards. A quick poisened dart takes care of them. I open the door. It seems as though everything is frozen in time as i move silently through the abandoned hallway. First the son's bedroom, i walk in he was still asleep, around my current age, Fifteen, The sword slithers out of its Sheath, and i slash him across the throat. Blood spurts he trys to shout but no sound comes..weakness overcomes him he drops, dead.5
Next the daughter's room. The same again. Dead.6
The Wife. Dead.7
Just as i finish my grisly work off, A sword blade slashes my calf, not expecting it, i fall to the floor.8
The Head of the household steps up in front of me, face contorted with rage. He raises his Katana and sweeps it down in a long deadly arc.9
Pain erupts through me. I see my head drop to the floor.10
I wake up, covered in sweat.11
My leg hurts, and as i pull back the covers i see it is plastered with blood, with fresh red liquid dripping from the wound on my calf. I sit there, shaken by what had happened, what i had done...12
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I dont really care if anybody thinks this is a load of rubbish, because i believe it to be real and thats what matters to me.
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Wow, this is an amazing write.. very dark, I would be terrified to wake up to a dream such as this. It sent chills down my spine, as I read it.
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Wow, that is some secret you bear. Just remember that you are remembering this for a reason. There is a lesson to be learned from this and that is why you are remembering. Try to find and it and next time maybe you won't wake up with the wound.
Okay now that I've said that.
I like this write very much. It was very brave of you to put that out there. Keep writing. I am enjoying getting to know you.
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Very deep, and very dark. I really like the way you wrote this, leaving suspense open. And I didn't laugh, because I'm pretty open-minded and believe that we humans don't know everything, but all will be revealed to us in due time. There's always the possibility of it being true. Thank you so much for entering my contest!!!
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Have you really dreamed this or something? How do you get this information? If you dreamed it, do you dream this (ir)regularly or did it just happen once? It sounds horrible to have to live with something like this and unless it's something you made up for a contest I'd like to help if I can.
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