Not just broken, but shattered too.1
Not just a crush;almost love for you. 2
Not just a look, not just a touch.3
I can't take it, it's too much4
I thought you, thought you loved me too.5
But now I see I was wrong.6
I'm always wrong.7
You're not worth it is what they say, 8
You're not worth crying about9
You're not worth it10
You're not worth it11
I can't take it 12
I can't take it13
But I can make it 14
I can make it15
Whoever said love fixed everything, 16
was very very wrong, 17
love fixes some things18
But not this song19
not this song20
I'm no cynic, 21
I believe in love22
I Believe in all the things up above23
Still do, 24
Still will,25
But who will come to find me?26
Who will come to hide me,27
when shadows of the dark, when they come to blind me28
Sunlight on my window,29
raindrops on my face30
No one here beside me, 31
Not even a trace32
Whoever it may be,33
with you it was never meant to be.34
For now I walk alone, 35
For now I walk alone36
Who knew that heartbreak can lead to this, 37
this, this,38
Who knew that heartbreak can lead to this, this, this.......
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hm has some good lines,
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hi hi hi hi!!! its good.
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um...okay
call me
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nothing!
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wait a minute....get what?
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weesna
uh...yea! now do ya get it?? -
simply amazing.
great poem! -
I love the whole "Sunlight on my window,
raindrops on my face" thing, it makes the poem pretty, I don't know why I keep reading this, I do mind though that ur reading over my shoulder! But I will c u in a few seconds when I look over my shoulder. This is fun typing when your reading what I'm saying. So do you like eh or not? you better tell me now. Yes I do, cause I have asked you sooo many times but never got an official answer. yes, i did get an official answer, and thank you, lol, this is still alot of fun, even though nno one else is going to get what I'm typing, I thought tht it was soo kewl whitht he whole micro thing!
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good job, very deep
Good poem, Nali. -
STILL FANTASTIC!
You did get over him? I remember one time when i convinced myself i was over a girl, but i wasn't. it turned out well in the end! well, you probably are better than i am, but it seems to me if you write this, how can you be over him 11 days after you write this? well, good luck in real life, it can be a pain! -
FANTASTIC!
Really Great! Amazing, amazing, amazing! That last line in your author comment doesn't apply any more I guess. It's good that you got over him! good poem! -
turned twelve in december, but close enough
anyway, thanx for the comment, it really gave me a feeling that i am not all alone in this world. thank you again
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weesna
aw, i keep reading it, I thought it was very deep, i loved it, and the guy it was about read it and he thought it was good to, well i can't really speak 4 him but u know thts what he said, lol, i really loved this poem, i thought it was very understanding and very touching, but sonali, i have to agree, if it hurts tht much get over, not trying to b mean but u know how it goes.It was beautiful, even if erik doesn't like u tht way,i know he thinks ur friendly. n e way lots of luv and hugs, c ya l8r sk8r
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Omg! I'm crying! this is A*W*S*O*M*E! It's beautiful. I'm really sorry about Erik. *hugs* I can feel everything that you say throughout the peice. Good job.*hugs again*
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AWSOME
It was really good!! it was kinda dark, though. U kno, u just gotta get over these things... i am going through the same thing-i think(u kno wat im taking about). It was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
It's good, I especially like the very beginning.
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amazing, loved it!
I thought this poem was really great, my grandma read and thought the same, Keep up the good writing and did I mention this piece was really great! -
sonali i'm so sorry. (the poem was really good though) teedle heedle i approve and applauded it!!
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Wow! 11? REALLY GOOD POEM, i know how it feels, i was going out with this guy for what? 3-4 months, i thought it was going really well, i thought he loved me as much as i loved him, but obviously he didn't
He said he dumped me because his IDENTICLE TWIN BROTHER fancied me, so then his twin asked me out, nd i said no, but then a few days later i changed my mind, he was the closest thing i could get to Chris, i thought after that i got over Chris but i didnt GRRRR darn these emotions! Anyway well done, i'm sure a lot of people can relate like me lol 
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Sensational
"Sunshine on my window, raindrops on my face" now, that's good poetry!!! This whole poem is good, it starts out sad, but you become stronger and more positive at the end. Great read!!! -
aww very good i loved it
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SONALI!!!!!!.... OH GOD!!! i know how it feels babe... and thats why i always say to just not talk about it... but sometime u have to and just hit a pillow like it is his head...
WELL u know i am always there for ya babe.! anyway...i am not gonna be all.. FORGET Him and that s.Hit because you just cant
not untill it passes... but just hit a pillow... and just relax
wit the ppl who can hit that damn pillow wit ya!!!!!
ttyl... bi -
This is an amazing poem, your emotion is felt deeply, but you still found a way to put them into such wonderful words.
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it was a 7 out of 10
It's deep, but not as deep as I thought it would have been. Long, too, but that's okay. Overall, not bad. -silence -
wow... its really deep and shows your emotions well.
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