For King, For God, For Country (scene 2)

The knight walked toward the tavern and already he could hear the shouts from inside.1

He knew his horse would be safe with the Smithy. He knew the man. It wasn’t his first time through this town. Besides, a few extra coppers in the old Smith's purse would help. He thought about the friends he left on the hill, the ones who wouldn’t be here tonight. How many were left? He couldn’t remember. It seemed like the Old Code Knights were fading and being replaced by younger ones who were only in it for the money and fame. He knew, as long as the King was still alive, it wouldn’t get too bad. But things seemed to be slipping away.2

The tavern was full of young Knights, drinking and throwing their weight around,3

showing so much disrespect to the same people they were sworn to protect.4

One, in particular, was a young barmaid. They were tossing her around like a grain sack and badgering her to sing for them. 5

The old Knight rose to his feet walked over toward the group. As he approached, he found himself suddenly surrounded by 5 young Knights. Putting his hand on the hilt of his sword, the Knight turned to face his adversaries. One of the young Knights pulled his own sword and said to the man, “You're outnumbered tonight, old man. So, unless you prefer death to life, I would mind your own.” The old Knight shook his head as he spoke, “You shame King, God, and country and need to learn some manners.”6

Just then, the barmaid broke free and ran to the old Knight. “Please sir, I wish no bloodshed tonight. There was enough shed in the field this day. I will sing for these rogues."7

The barmaid lifted her head and sang:8

Down by the river's waters9

Under the shady tree10

Maidens talk of fighting11

Pray their men to victory12

The muddy banks below them13

The rainy sky above14

With Knights upon their horses15

Take with them a countries love16

They fight for God and country17

They fight for Arthur, King18

So gallant and so noble19

The bards and jesters sing20

I say to you 'tis noble21

I say to you 'tis right22

For the Knights that fight with Arthur23

Fight with gallant codes of might
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After the song, the old Knight left the tavern. As he was walking down the muddy street, he heard footsteps from behind. When he turned to face whatever was behind him, he saw the barmaid running toward him. “I just wanted to thank you, sir. I’ve heard the stories of the old Knights and their Code. Perhaps the young men tonight were just weary from the battle today. Thank you again, sir Knight and long live the King.”25

The old Knight didn’t say anything, he just turned and continued towards the stable thinking to himself:26

I hope, for England’s sake, she’s right. I hope Arthur survives. But it’s never been, that easy.27

Peace Abel28

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  • Eyrion
    December 21, 2005
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    Love it.... this is a great start to something amazing.

  • JETS jets jets jets
    December 21, 2005
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    WELL DONE!

  • Z---
    December 20, 2005
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    LOVELY.

  • ocerus
    December 20, 2005
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    This is pretty good man, but to really make it work as well as it possibly can, you need to describe the thoughts of the other characters in more depth and detail. You also need to describe the sights, sounds, and smells of this world in greater detail. But this is pretty good, and there's no doubt that you have talent.


  • Unbridled1
    December 20, 2005
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    Again, i say...i love your creativity and the fact that you can write on so many different subjects. You do it in such a way that it all seems natural...no area seems out of your range or reach.

    I think what I enjoy about this particular story line is that it all reads like slices...I don't know how better to explain that. Just these little glimpses...i sort of feel like i'm reading journal entries from a time long past. I probably make no sense here...lol.

    you da man


    Ann


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