Darkness approached as the sun disappeared behind the rooftops of the town. Rune waited for his friend to come, but she was always a little late for their get togethers. He paced anxiously also wondering if she was alright. He tended to worry about her alot, just for the fact that he was so in love with her, it was insane. He hid the fact very well, but she caught onto his game quickly. For she felt the same way, why else would she ditch her other friends just for him? They weren't that good of friends anyways, gossip queens, such whores. He sat on a bench in the park where they always met before. From the edge of the park he could see her running towards him as usual she hated to be late, but it could not be helped. She worked a double shift at the local dinner of her parent's, she was asked to help out alot because she was the eldest of the four children. Her skirt waved in the wind playfully, toying with Rune's mind, what lies underneath? She was wearing a light jacket, but it was open exposing her low cut shirt. Did she know how to flirt with Rune without even saying a word? No kidding. He was at heaven watching the most beautiful girl he's ever seen, walk towards him. As she came close enough he could see her features: Long silky red hair that fell upon her shoulders, ice blue eyes that entice you in or stare daggers at you, full luscious lips painted red, slim body with her breasts fitting her nicely, not as overbearing or non proportional, killer long legs smooth as a new born baby. His mind was swimming with anticipation, for this would be the night he told her everything.1
"Hey Rune!! Sorry I'm late!" His friend spewed breathlessly, she bent over and tried to catch her breath. He smiled and laughed playfully at her stature.2
"You're always late, so I'm used it now." He teased her, with a smile in reply. She loved how he joked at her all the time, it was all good fun. He moved closer and embraced her, he inhaled her scent quietly. She smelt wonderful, as usual, she always dressed to the nines to be with him. He realized he was hanging onto her a little too long and smiled shyly and let her go. She grinned wide and kissed his cheek. If it were not for the cover of darkness she would have seen him blush. 3
"So are we going to stand around all night, or are we going to your place?" She broke the silence, and Rune only nodded his head and grabbed her hand and walked towards his house. It was a beautiful summer evening, with just a slight breeze with the aroma of flowers to their noses. They approached his house and unlocked the door and led her inside. She walked in and stopped half way, because the place was lit up with candles and dinner was set on the table, good old room mate, Rune thought to himself. He lived with his other best friend for his whole life, he was gone out for the night now.4
"What is all this Rune?" She turned around slowly and asked him. He approached her slowly and kissed her lips softly, her eyes went wide and she relaxed into his touch and returned the kiss. He brought her closer and she felt his bulge in his pants with her leg. She moaned lightly in his mouth as he reached down and grabbed her rear firmly. She wanted to push him away, but not really, for she was a virgin. He knew this but he had to try with her anyways, since he loved her with all his heart. They broke the kiss and looked into each other's eyes deeply, she was probing his soul and found her answer. He was the one she wanted to give her virginity too, as well as her heart and soul. She nodded and began taking off her jacket. He led her into the bedroom and undressed her slowly, enjoying her beauty. He unhooked her bra, releasing her firm breasts, aching to to be touched by him. He obliged and licked her nipples in circles, with his other hand he grabbed her breast firmly. A small moan escaped her lips and she grabbed onto his head, burrowing him into her chest deeper. He sucked on her neck, branding her his, she wiggled under his fingers as they moved down her body.5
"Please be gentle baby" She moaned quietly, he smiled and slipped her panties off her ankles exposing a very wet pussy. She was dripping already and the fun has only just began, so he released her of suffering and plunged his fingers into her slowly and deeply. She gasped and moaned his name, he had just the right touch and made this pleasurable instead of painful. He stopped and licked his fingers, she tasted so very sweet. She motioned that she wanted a taste, so he moved his fingers over her tongue. He could not take anymore and he took off his boxers, exposing his very long and hard cock. She looked down with wide eyes, licked her lips enjoying seeing her very first real life cock. Beads of sweat rolled down her forehead and her back, she was so hot from all the foreplay. He climbed on top of her and slowly went into her. She winced and bite her lip; closing her eyes tightly. He was being very gentle, but he was too big for most girls his age anyways. So he did his best, luckily she was drenched with juices, it made it alot easier on them both. There was so much it rolled down his shaft and onto the sheets. He finally made it all the way in, and she brought him closer for a passionate kiss. 6
"I love you so much Rune, please tell me you feel the same." She uttered softly behind moans, he smiled widely and leaned his head against hers. 7
"Of course I do, I've loved you for so long now, I just didn't know how to tell you." He replied as she kissed and cried from joy. He wiped her tears away and she smiled at him. She was so sweet and kind, no tears should pass her eyes. He made sure no one would make her cry, and he never made her cry either. She held onto his back and he went in and out of her much easily now. Her moans intensified, but not from pain, from so much pleasure she was receiving. Her nails raked his bare back and that only turned him on more, he pumped more aggressively, making her scream out. She wrapped her legs around his back and came into several orgasms. The juices were pouring out of her like a waterfall and Rune could not hold back anymore. So with a final thrust he let his hot liquid shoot into her body, while she came to another orgasm. She pushed her hips into his tighter, making sure she got it all inside of her. He stayed inside of her and relaxed on top of her. She played with his hair and sighed happily.8
"I'm so glad you're mine now" She stated and he kissed her passionately. He was overjoyed that she was his now, he intended to keep it that way forever.9
"Dinner has gone cold by now, it looked so good too!" Laughed Rune, and she giggled as they both embraced each other until the morning.10
Author notes
Well since the title I decided to add a little graphic manner to it, hope it doesn't seem bad.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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hehe innocent? Well I could do an innocent if you wish lol
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Well thank you, I appreciate the comment
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i really liked it.it was sweet and innocent. i just adored it. good write..
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I really liked this...but it is certainly not R rated....other than that minor detail this was pretty well written...it could be worked on the build up a little...because even though it is assumed that the characters know each other there is not a lot of sexual tension between them...this is something you can work on though....overall though great story....keep writing...Luv Caz
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Okay I have to give you props on this one. It was alot better than your story. I again relate to you to lay off of the "cock" and "pussy" words. they aren't so nice. Use a thesuras next time. I'm sure you can do better. And I agree with imp110, there wasn't really any foreplay. But like I said keep practicing and taking people's advice with a spoon full of sugar and you'll do better. -
awesome write! very descriptive and it flowed really well, a job well done
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Cool write, although it's not exactly R rated! Lol, but maybe that's just me
Ummm It was easy to read and the descriptions were incredible! Keep it up.
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wow the whole thing seems more than familiar oh well good write very impressed with you anywyas i know your going to say something not so very nice but very good write
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