Perfect Christmas

Its Christmas time once again1

Everyone is filled with joy2

The stalkings are hung3

And the feast is on the table4

There is holly every were5

And the tree is decorated6

With many different colors7

And the presents are wrapped8

The ever green is tall9

It is in the window10

The snow is lightly falling11

And the lights are glowing12

Everything is perfect13

Everything is right14

Even the dead body15

On the living room floor16

Author notes

ok dont ask about this one....but you did ask for a twist at the end....

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  • Jinxgirl
    December 19, 2005
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    lol that certainly was a twist, completely unexpected. i laughed at that! very twisted/warped, i loved it. thanks for entering, good luck!


  • December 18, 2005
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    nice twist

    i like the poem, it was leading me one way then just totally threw me another

  • The Green Writer
    December 18, 2005
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    cool

    twas the night before christmas
    and all the threw the house
    everybodys dead.
    What a great poem. Awesome.


  • December 18, 2005
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    not much unlike most of hers

    emily and dead bodys... from dancing to christmas trees... pegiune pie.. huh what was i talking bout??? oh ya good job

  • StabbyJack
    December 17, 2005
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    fan freaking tastic

    haha ha ha hahahaha thats great i love it

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