Many years ago in a small witch shop2
belonged a cursed item3
A small pewter carousel 4
beautiful to the eye5
But deep inside it kept locked in it6
a demon of hate and torment7
This demon entered ones dreams and while lost in sleep8
And would steal their unguarded heart9
While those souls are kept lost in a nightmarish dream10
This is the story of the cursed Carousel that was kept locked away11
In hopes no one would suffer it's horrible curse of nightmares and beautiful songs..."12
"Shut up Daron!" Marie pushed him over and he fell off the log that surrounded group's campfire. Everyone laughed.13
"I'm telling you, it's true!" he said14
"Sure man.." Eric through a few marshmallows Daron's way and hitting him. They had gone out to the woods that night to tell ghost stories like they do every Friday night. But this story being told was different, it wasn't just a story15
It was a rumor. 16
Rumor that the carousel is off again laying it's curse on others. 17
through out the latest news papers, more and more deaths have been listed, all of them died in their sleep. Children were frightened, Teens joked about it, and adults only ignored it, yet kept their thoughts to themselves. No one knows what's really behind the rumor of this carousel that is once again haunting the small town in Ohio. People only ignore it, saying 'nothing like that could ever happen to me'. 18
"I'm telling you this is real!" Daron pulled out a folded page from a news paper.19
"I think it's just a joke someones playing on us." Josh said, adding more wood to a dieing fire. But Daron showed off his proof.20
"Right here. they found an old diary from 1876, the year the carousel first started killing people. Apparently this person knew first hand about it."21
Marie shivered a little bit- "You don't know, it could be fake."22
"It's not fake. I'll show you." He passed around the paper, it took up nearly two pages of the news paper, and as the group read it, and eerie feeling came over them all23
And they believed24
13 February 187625
It is Sunday today and I had just returned from my grandfather's funeral. 'He looked so peaceful and happy' everyone said. But I could tell he was not. Grandmother said he had bought her a beautiful little ornament. It looked like a small tent with horses going around in a circle, yet the horses all had stakes through their bodies. "They aren't real horses" she told me "they were wood, and you'd ride them as they spun around in a circle". She said that this carousel would play a sweet song. She and Grandfather put the song the song on right before going to bed 2 nights ago. Grandmother said she had woken up from a dream she had about this little carousel, a frightening dream. When she turned to Grandfather though, he was dead. At the funeral Grandmother gave the this carousel for my own and I too listened to that haunting song that took my grandfather's life. For I am to scared to take my own. Times were hard for me, Father beat me, and Mother watched. I am writing this as I listen to it's dark tune of loneliness and torment.26
I closed my eyes for some time and say shadows fly around me. My lonely room has just gotten colder and last breaths can be seen. Hopefully this happy demon my take my life and bring it to a better place. Looking in the mirror I see only a hideous goat like beast staring back, it's arm around my shoulder It's claws around my neck. The night is getting old, and so am I. So goodbye all who have known me and those yet to find my name. Let this cursed Carousel take me to a better place27
123 years later28
The curse lives29
Author notes
This was a story I had been planning to write for sometime now, and unfortunately the idea was stolen by another user from this website, who I used to be friends with from my school, so no, it wasn't coincidence that we had the same idea cuz I did tell her about it one night, and trust me, I regret it.
This is somewhat confusing and as the story goes on, you may have to reread a few parts to fully understand it, but it's worth it, for those who really like horror stories. this only the beginning, so if you want me to write post the rest up here, please let me know. this is a long story and it'd take quite awile to type everything up, and I don't wanna go through all this for nothing.
thanks
p.s. yes, the title is supposed to be Ca Rou Sel. no mistake there
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Comments
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I am also a fan of horror stories and this one looks promising.
I will definately read more of this should you post the rest (which I hope you do). great start to the story and I look forward to reading more of it.
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i'm a fan of horror stories, and i definately liked this. i like the way it moves, and i love the creepy urban legend-vibe to it. also, the thing with the kid at the end and the demon is just unbelivably creepy. i'd really like you to post the rest of this, if you wouldn't mind.
