Friends One Moment, Lovers the Next

My friend and I were sitting on the couch watching a comedy movie, while the snow slowly fell outside, I was sure that she would have to stay the night.  She was a lovely specimen of the female race, very eccentric and kind hearted.  That is why I associated myself with her, I enjoy the company of people I can relate too.  Her personality could melt the most cold at heart, she was the sunshine in every room.  Her body was to be desired as well, with her short height of 5'3", honey blonde hair, emerald eyes you could fall into, full luscious lips, ample perky breasts, and legs that were smooth as silk.  I forgot where I was for a moment as I was drooling over her body without knowing it.  She picked up on it and smiled and poked my nose and cuddled closer to me on the couch.1

"Jesus it's cold in here."  she muttered, I smiled and wrapped the blanket around both of us.  It really wasn't cold at all inside the house, but I could tell what she was hinting at.  She shivered slightly as I pulled her closer to my body, she gasped slightly as I wrapped my arm around her waist.  She placed her nose on my neck and surprisingly enough, it was freezing cold!  I shivered at her touch and placed my head on hers and closed my eyes, enjoying the closeness.  She leaned in and kissed my neck to my shock and wonder, I sat there wondering what she was thinking.   She winked and smiled an evil smirk as she pushed me onto my back and straddled my body, wrapping her legs around my sides.   2

"You know Dante, I've been thinking, all this time we've wasted not getting to know each other better."  She broke the heavy silence of my shock.  I was puzzled at to what she was referring too.  3

"What do you mean?  We've been friends forever."  I replied to her odd question, and to my dismay, her flashing her pearly white teeth signalled to me all I needed to know.  She wanted me as much as I wanted her.  I never was really any good at picking hints, but how could I avoid it any further? She leaned down and kissed my lips softly but firmly, showing her love for me, and I returned the favor.   Her hands wandered my body, starting from my neck slowly tracing one finger down to my chest.  I was breathing shallowly, trying not to show my anticipation of her movements.  She must have known what I was doing, for she slowly slid her own shirt off her body, exposing her ample breasts, and she was not wearing a bra.  My jaw was askew, admiring her in all her glory as she slid my shirt off as well.  The fire roared in the background as our bodies writhed together in the heat of our own.  I reached up and massaged her breasts with my hands, slowly and firmly.  Making sure not to miss a single inch of her chest, and watching her squirm with delight as a moan escaped her lips.  She took my finger and slid it into her mouth, slowly teasing my finger tips with her moist tongue.  I closed my eyes and groped her chest more aggressively now, only to hear her moans increase with every touch I made.  She lifted her hips up enough and I knew what was to come next so I reached down and unbuttoned her pants enough so my hands could slide inside easily.  I stopped when I felt her very wet thong, I licked my lips and slid my fingers underneath; inside of her.  She gasped loudly and whispered my name as I continued to plunge deeper into her with my fingers.  She could not take anymore and stood up, and brought me with her, she ripped off my clothes; I to hers.  We stood there naked in front of each other for the first time, and it seemed.....natural.  I kissed her lips passionately and exploded her mouth with my tongue as she reached down and grabbed my manhood.  I groaned into her mouth as she stroked slowly and firmly, we both were attuned to touching and feeling each other just perfectly.  She knew exactly what I wanted and how I wanted it, as she pulled me closer as my erection was touching her moist spot.  I picked her up in my arms and sat back onto the couch as she slowly slid herself onto me.  We both were breathing heavily, enjoying every second of this bliss.  As I was fully inside of her, she moaned very loudly, tilting her head back and sucking her fingers.  I leaned my head back and thrust up inside of her deeper and deeper with every thrust.  She was screaming my name as I held onto her hips and moved in and out faster.  4

"Oh my god!! Dante!!!"  She screamed, I shuddered and continued to thrust, I loved to hear her scream with her naturally soft voice.  She gripped my shoulder and clawed it hard as she came to an orgasm, breathing heavy and moaning.  I could not hold back any further and pushed in one last time and exploded deep within.  Her eyes widened and came onto another orgasm.  I felt her juices flow onto my shaft and downwards, I closed my eyes and my breath would not slow down.  She collapsed on top of me and held me close as the night grew on and the fire died down.5

"Now aren't you glad we got to know each other?"  She said playfully, and my reply was only a nod of my head, and we both drifted off into sleep.6

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My first clean erotica, please tell me what you think.

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  • finding myself 84
    December 18, 2005
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    Wowee... first erotica of yours that I've read I believe and I enjoyed every last word of it. Innocent ~> naughty! Loved that. *Sonya*

  • tar
    December 18, 2005
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    Well I have to say I really enjoyed it , it was very nicely written .I like that I was able to grasp some idea of the characters, and their relationship as friends before the became lovers, and that u also took time writing it .By making your piece more descriptive so that it created a nice imagery when it was read .. etc .. lol its just grate

  • Dark-Cat
    December 17, 2005
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    omg, wow! that was really good...extremely descriptive and tastefully written..great job!


  • baby candy abc
    December 17, 2005
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    WOW......that was awesome and tasteful....you did a wonderful job. lexie


  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    December 17, 2005
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    this is really good and i hope by children you din't mean 17 year olds lol any way i loved this it's awesum keep it up!!! thanx for sharing this with all of us here at allpoetry i really enjoyed reading this
    love ya
    ~*becca*~

    you are a great writer
    keep up the great and awesumly awesum work!!!

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