“Mel, wake up”1
I pressed my fingers to my eyes and started rubbing them.2
“What”3
“You need to help me with this”My class mate Dennis said to me.4
I opened my eyes, and whipped up my drool. I had fallen asleep in chemistry. The teacher-Mrs. Conley-got up from her desk, and started to give us direction. 5
“You will be mixing the two chemicals in front of you. Then you are to observe what happens, and write it down”.6
As soon as she finished the bell rang. Every one sighed in relief, and started to leave the room for lunch. 7
Entering the combination on my locker, and opening it I grabbed my lunch, and continued to the cafeteria. 8
The day was turning out quite well, and I was looking forward to attending art at the end. But unfortunately the thought of having to stay with Rosetta kept into my mind and it made me dread the end of the day. I felt as if Id rather stay at school for the rest of my life then have to actually be at Rosetta’s house. But I knew the end of the day would come eventually, and then I would have to head to her house. I would just have to suffer, and get over it.9
Reaching the cafeteria I swung the door open and walked to my table, and found the chair I always sat in. I set my lunch on the table, and went to sit down. As soon as my butt touched the chair, I could feel the cold, liquid soak into my pants, and up my back. I shout of my chair as sson as I knew there ws something wrong. I looked at my back. It was covered in black ink. As soon as I noticed what was on me everyone In the cafeteria started to laugh uncontrollably. Emotion was building up inside of me. I ran for the door. Turning back for only a second, I could see Rosetta. She was laughing along with her friends. When she noticed me looking at her, she quickly stopped and hid her face. I swung back around and headed for the bathroom. In the halls I could hear other students laughing as I passed them. 10
Reaching the bathroom door I pushed it open with all of the energy I had left. I entered a stall and covered my face with my hands. I could feel my eyes starting to swell up. I started to cry.11
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this is really gd, it only gets better, and this is something i can relate to, this happened to me a couple of years ago, i remember spending the rest of my lunch crying int the toilets, shit thing to go through but great story, well done xxxx
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AWWW
GREAT
“Mel, wake up”
I pressed my fingers to my eyes and started rubbing them.
“What”
“You need to help me with this”My class Dennis said to me.
I opened my eyes, and whipped up my drool. I had fallen asleep in chemistry. The teacher-Mrs. Conley-got up from her desk, and started to give us direction.
“You will be mixing the two chemicals in front of you. Then you are to observe what happens, and write it down”.
As soon as she finished the bell rang. Every one sighed in relief, and started to leave the room for lunch.
Entering the combination on my locker, and opening it I grabbed my lunch, and continued to the cafeteria.
The day was turning out quite well, and I was looking forward to attending art at the end. But unfortunately the thought of having to stay with Rosetta kept into my mind and it made me dread the end of the day. I felt as if Id rather stay at school for the rest of my life then have to actually be at Rosetta’s house. But I knew the end of the day would come eventually, and then I would have to head to her house. I would just have to suffer, and get over it.
Reaching the cafeteria I swung the door open and walked to my table, and found the chair I always sat in. I set my lunch on the table, and went to sit down. As soon as my butt touched the chair, I could feel the cold, liquid soak into my pants, and up my back. I shout of my chair as sson as I knew there ws something wrong. I looked at my back. It was covered in black ink. As soon as I noticed what was on me everyone In the cafeteria started to laugh uncontrollably. Emotion was building up inside of me. I ran for the door. Turning back for only a second, I could see Rosetta. She was laughing along with her friends. When she noticed me looking at her, she quickly stopped and hid her face. I swung back around and headed for the bathroom. In the halls I could hear other students laughing as I passed them.
Reaching the bathroom door I pushed it open with all of the energy I had left. I entered a stall and covered my face with my hands. I could feel my eyes starting to swell up. I started to cry.
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kate this is really good, you need to keep this up, seriously, i effin' love this story.
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~Kambodia
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