Watching Her- Part 11

When Sarah went to step out of Kevin big Dodge truck, Kevin told her to wait, and went around. He opened the door for her and took her reluctant hand in his and helped her step out. 1

This time, Sarah decided to keep away from her strappy sandals and innocent makeup. She lined her eyes with makeup, pressed on lip gloss, and patted on brown eyeshadow and foundation. She mixed up her outfit and surprised Kevin at her door wearing strappy black heels, a short jean miniskirt, and a black top, that strapped across her back, exposing it in its entirety. Her soft, straight, brown hair added to her mischievous catlike eyes. To top off her sexy look, she’d tanned outside for days, even before being invited. 2

Kevin was extremely nervous. Sarah usually wore conservative clothes and barely any makeup. He loved her natural beauty, but he couldn’t deny that her smoky look made his knees wobble. 3

They entered Randy’s house, one of Kevin’s friends, to find a wide living room filled with a few couches and people sitting down, talking and drinking beer. A few people, mostly girls, greeted Kevin. Thundering hip hop music could be heard in the next room. 4

They entered and found it to be a nice bar/den, obviously where the adults had coffee and nice conversations with the father’s boss and his wife. But the cozy room had turned into a teens paradise. The bar table had two large kegs settled on it, surrounded by boys that urged and raved for more alcohol. Girls were sharing bottles of wine, that obviously came from under the bar, random people were making out, and many were dancing. 5

But the real party cam from through the glass doors, where tons of people were on the balcony, dancing next to the thundering stereo that was settled on the wooden platform that overlooked a large, blue lake and forest. Girls danced, lots of skin showing, and guys dirty dancing with them. Some people hung at the sides, doing body shots, making out, and more provocative dancing that was more of a strip tease.6

Sarah was immediately repulsed, and Kevin could only look back at her, embarrassed that this, of all places, was where he had taken her. But she shrugged, and went to the bar for a beer, in which five guys were happy to give her. They stared at her body and legs, and Kevin could only stand there and watched as they oogled her with their eyes. ‘For Christ sake, all she does is get a beer and guys are melting.’ But then another thought came into his head. ‘But aren’t YOU melting for her as well?’7

She quickly gulped down her first plastic cup and asked for another. Kevin stood back, aghast. At the first party, he wasn’t at Sarah’s side. If he’d known that this was what she was doing at the first, he wouldn’t have taken her to the second. 8

Sarah took her second cup, and sat down on the couch next to another set of girls and immediately started chatting with them. Kevin didn’t know if they knew eachother or what, but his thoughts and concerns about Sarah were immediately interrupted by the calling of his friends.9

Derek came in, hugging on Emma Thorton, a beer in his right hand, his left hand securely around Emma’s thin, exposed, stomach. She smiled, already buzzing. “Yo Kevin,” Derek called.10

Kevin swung around to spot the awful sight. Derek had hooked up with Emma again, in their off and on again dating situation, which would probably end up in an abortion, as Sarah liked to joke about. The thought made a smile spread across Kevin’s lips as he greeted Derek.11

“Who are you here with?”12

“Sarah.”13

“Where is she?”14

Kevin reluctantly pointed her out on the couch, his fear of her leaving with someone else practically written on his face. Sarah was sipping her beer, laughing with another girl.15

“Woah! Is that really Sarah Soda? Holy shit! When did she get so hot?” Derek practically yelled. Emma frowned and hit his chest. Derek ignored her. “Is she with you?” He signaled between Kevin and Sarah.16

“Well, kind-”17

“Ofcourse, he is, Derek,” Emma pointed out over the thundering rap music. 18

“Oh, dude, I’m sorry.” Derek winked to Kevin and wished him good luck. He went to the bar and got himself another drink, Kevin following him. 19

Kevin drank his beer and followed Derek and Emma out to the balcony, keeping his eye on Sarah as he slid the glass door closed.20

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  • AdequateSuspicions
    December 14, 2005
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    *rocks in seat* write more pppllllleeeeeaaaaasssssseeeee!! lol have a holly jolly christmas, don't sue me for wishing you well, have a holly jolly christmas, I don't want to go to jail!! lol *shrug*


  • Juliette Rose
    December 14, 2005
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    Can't wait for the next one!