Life of a bubble- short

Once upon a time, a bubble was born. "Oh, i am so pretty!" He thought. He weaved as he floated up to the roof of a building. "What is this," he asked him self as he laid eyes on a big puffy looking creature. The puffy creature, who was infact a bird, looked at him and, POP, the bubble was no more.1

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  • Sjr
    December 21, 2005
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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not the bubble!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    heehee

  • notreallypoetic
    December 14, 2005
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    Great story!

    Touching, dramatic, suspenseful!

    Now, turn it into a screenplay and you've got yourself an Oscar.