She sat on the bed, the same old kinky smile pasted across her lips.1
I wanted her so bad! We had kissed before but never anything beyond that.2
She winked at me as she retrieved a half empty bottle of vodka from under her bed.3
"you naughty girl!" i snatched it off her giggling and filled the cap to the rim wincing as the nasty taste slid down my throat.4
We danced around her bedroom at a high after five or so shots, giggling and singing along to some crappy 80's song. She switched onto the camera on my phone and started posing taking seductive pictures of herself. I bit into my lips. She was unbelievably sexy. Wearing hot pants and an over-sized shirt, her long dyed purple hair waving around her. She gazed at me and held out her hand.5
"care to join me?" I burst out laughing and gulped down the last of the vodka and scrambled onto the bed beside her. Us two drunk girls laying on a bed posing seductively into the camera. A normal thing for fifteen year-olds to do at a sleepover.6
"right then!" She lifted her shirt over her head revealing her small but perky breasts. I gulped. She smiled at me and began unbuttoning my shirt.7
I blushed and giggled.8
"What are you doing?" i questioned her. She paused and left her hand at my breast as she looked at me, her eyes flirting with mine.9
"we need to make it more interesting, worth remembering." She tore off the rest of my shirt and straddled me onto the bed. My heart was beating crazily. I could feel the warmth between her thighs on my hips. She aimed the camera about to take the photo.10
I brushed her hair away from her pale yet flushed face and searched into her green cat-like eyes. I couldn't take it anymore. I pulled her lips onto mine and forced my tongue into her mouth bringing her to a longing moan. I ran my fingers to her breast and flicked my thumb across her nipple. Sitting up i thrust my hips against hers and wrapped her legs around me. She ripped off my bra and began sucking on my breasts, her tongue dancing on my nipples. i moaned loudly as she placed her mouth completely over my hard peaks.11
"oh my god!" i whispered in an exhilarating breath. I brought her head back to mine and pulled her into another loving kiss. Pushing her onto her back i began to lick from her neck downwards. Her heavy breathing made me so wet. When i got to her panties i removed them with my teeth. Her legs were tensing and i knew she needed to come. I slid my forefinger inside her and she struggled in ecstasy. With two fingers inside her i stroked every inch of moist flesh within, her moans satisfying me more. I began to flick my tongue across her clit, my fingers still inside her. She placed her hands on my head her nails digging into my skin. I began to lick faster and harder as her moans turned to screams bringing me to excitement. She gripped onto the edge of the bed and flung her head back. In short breaths she came. Wave after wave and i lapped it up in satisfaction.12
"that would have made a good photo." She smiled.13
Author notes
True story *bows* yes i'm the one doing all the work
ok i tried to count but i get really frustrated. I lost count at 314 I'm sorry! I'm only 15 and it hurt my eyes! I'll make it up to you!
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Absolutely a wonderful and amazing story. Rarely does one see true spontaniaty in works such as this. Excellent job with this.
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Awsome. Lucky you got to live it and i only get to get of cause of it lol
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I can't comment. Grammar errors is the only thing I found was wrong.
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lol nice, was she straight? soz, its just i am a dyke and i tend to have a habit of gettin pissed and hookin up with my straight mates, lol, no harm done. a good write, it turned me on so it has to be good
ok i'll leave it at that before i say somthing that i will regret. lovs ya, becca
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Very arousing
I loved this story, the immediacy in its style. Not a wasted word (just two wasted girls)
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i think it stunning, its always best to write what you know... corney i know but it helps!!
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amasing!!!
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BRAVO!
This was great, simply because it was true. You did have some typos and grammar errors (sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi), but it wasn't anything bad. Your story just kind of flows. Haha...seeing as how I'm bisexual, I know exhilarating something like this can be the first time. Awesome way to capture the moment. Oi...and I love that last line!
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excellent!!!!
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Yep, It's true...lol
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Wooh, is this written from personal experiance miss Nat? Hehe awesome story though babe... got me going
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It is indeed written from personal experience hehehe Thanks doll.
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very good keep it up
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wow! i turned on a teacher *is happy* lol
doot! i am in the middle of writing more at the moment, i also have another story, Cold Shower [Part 1] and also Cold Shower [Part 2] enjoy 
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that was so great i was sitting in class and my teacher was like what are you so into that you can't take your eyes off the screen so lol i showed it to him and he was just looking at it and was like ok don't read things like this anymore and when you write to the person who wrote this tell her/him that they did a great job so..there you go you turned on a teacher
I WANT MORE STORIES PLEASE :
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Thanks, i will write more
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Ohh...very hot...thank you SOOOOOOO much for this...good story and very good writing, not to mention very sexy! I really hope you like wrote a bunch more cause I would love to read them.
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wow! this was amazing!! so loving this! your writes are amazing! this was soo hot! i think i need a shower now.. this was amazing! n yeah a sequal would be good
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Surely something to tickle your senses!
A short story but damn was it good!! Ah, sequal! Oh sequal!! lol. Wonderful descriptives! So exciting and fun. It's got me feeling fine, oh baby!! Sounds quite exciting! I think you did a great job, and I became so involved with the story! I felt like I was there watching the whole thing! You did a great job hooking us, and reeling us in: "She sat on the bed, the same old kinky smile pasted across her lips." It sends so many questions through my mind...I have to read on. At first it's like okay sitting on the bed...huh...yeah...oh what's this talking about a kinky smile? Why so kinky? Are they doing something, talking about something,what?! Great job! You have me wanting more! More! lol. 
Bravo! 
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good, subtle and well told...ok..it did tke to to the 7th heavens...frells...sure domnica would luv to do the same to me if she reads this..
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Gosh! is my grammar that bad?!
oh dear
Well thankyou for your comment, much appreciated 
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Brilliant! Lovely, m'dear. But, there's just one thing... the grammar. Your grammar and punctuation killed me. BUT, I may be willing to overlook it...
Good luck, and I loved it! (tis all right if you lost count, it happens )
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OH... MY...GAWD! I LOVE THIS!! im kinda horny now! = p Me and my girl mate were just being dirty n she showed me this story, and wow, im just lovin it!
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This story is certainly a fine bit of erotica - entertaining indeed. I've a terrible pet-peeve for 'I' going uncapitalized, but that's just a minor personal gripe and entirely excusable in erotica. You did an excellent job putting so much into so short a story.
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This was my first time Thanks for reading Well what do you want to know? xXxPurexXx
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First time or r u an expert I feel... I wonder... Ihoe you win you'd deserve it man am I missing out on something. Well have fun I lovee the way you write!!!!
lots of love and kisses
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Awsomely Beautiful.
This is A VERY GOOD STORY!!!
I like it.
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thank xXxPurexXx
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wow great story god you made me horny for awhile cause the way you explaned the whole thing i pictered it from the very start you did an awsome job wow i am still thinkiing about it god. really great poem and thanks for sharing this story it was beatiful and i applaud.
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there are 568 words in your story.
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yes we were drunk lol but i would do it again sober xXx
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lol sure do thanks xXxPurexXx
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this is awesome.....sounds like uknow how to havea good time lol this is awesome
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im hungry
okay was yall drunk. cause that was some wild shit yall. I couldnt do nothin like that even if i was playin (maybe cause i got issues) But then again that not the case. Damn this was too good. It had to be a party over thurr fa somthin like that to go down like that. Damn this was good. -
Beautifully done .. and I love the way it was made to seem so pure, natural, loving ... So many people still think in the way of 'oh homosexuality is a DREADFUL habit; you must "protect" your child from it" ... which is a disgrace!!
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Wow sounds like you know how to have fun!
Another excellent write!
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I think it was great, The detail etc is amazin and it provided some amazing images. Thanks for sharin
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Thanks for the opinion xXxPurexXx
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Okay yes this was good, as far as erotica goes. At one point I was enjoying the read, that was untill the "naughty" stuff began to happen.
I don't, maybe it was something to do that I am finding stories like this old and boring. But, as far as it being what it is, erotica, I'll give it an applause, without sound too much of a hypocrite of course.
My erotica stories are just shit.
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hey thanks xXxPurexXx
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Cool story, you should add more!...Sounds like we have a lot in common. Anyways good work, keep it up!
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lol xXx
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Thankyou xXx
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lol, it will be one day xXxPurexXx
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mmmm....thank you, love. lol.
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Wow
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That was anazing! Reminds me of the first time i was with a girl...It was amzing...man im getting turned on just thinking about it! this was a wonderful write, i definately had a mental picture while i was reading, and well, i liked it!
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I love this. Nothing more beautiful that two girls exploring one another.
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awesome, i wish that was meeee
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Thankyou, Talia for your comment hope to see you around again xXxPurexXx
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A wonderful tale well told. I'm in the mood for this type of writing tonight. Thanks for starting things off.
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Nice work sounds like an interesting experience
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teehee xXx
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thanks, yer you totally sussed me out xXx
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thankyou xXx
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holly hell I LOVED THIS. Maybe I should try this sometime with my GF...A sleep over....LOL PARTY!
Freakin awesome write!
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i kinda wish i was a girl, only kidding, you have a great talent
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well done
wow...well done babe. beautifully written if i may say so. it started to get a bit rushed at the end...less detail..almost as if you were gettin kinda hott on just writing...thats awesome..but try to keep the detail up...other than that...it was great babe. keep up the great work. -Sable- -
Wow...ugh..wow...reminds me of something I am going to do to my girlfriend and things we have done. Very nicely written. Definitely hot. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks. Yer it is hot xXxPurexXx
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wow omg this is so sexy im straight but im really thinking about trying this out lol. soooo hot!!! keep going please! x x x jen x x x
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Thankyou xXxPurexXx
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Full of lust/love
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Thankyou, i really appreciate it xXxPurexXx
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Awesome write. I've written some erotica but it never came out this well. Bravo!
(I loved the end)
xx-Kitti
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Thankyou xXxPurexXx
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thanks xXx
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Thnaks and indeed i did xXxPurexXx
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i will indeed xXxPurexXx
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Awesome write you got here! Great job, I wish I had the brains you have. I'm 25, I've got 10 years on you and I couldn't come up with something as great as this. Keep up the great writes and I will be looking and watching! lol
Jennifer
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very nice in the beginning but when it gets to the bra ripping off bit, it gets... how i do i put it... typical i suppose. i really liked it up to that point, and i loved the last line nonetheles.
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wow this was awsome!! haha dancing to a crappy 80's song
thats funny
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hahaha this is aweome. hope you had fun
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LMAO...what do I laugh? I'm not sure. Great write though. I'm writing and posting the second part to my story "Black Mascara" as we speak. Let me know what you think.
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that was really good, good write!
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lol thankyou xXxPurexXx
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Thankyou xXxPurexXx
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I never read things like this but that was very nice. ^^ I don't think my mind s innocent anymore. lol
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Hahaa. This was great. Liked it very much. Def. wish I could have done this with my girlfriend at age 15. She was too prude. But, yeah, this was cool. Very well written. Good descriptive words. haha. Rock on!
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lol thankyou. No i dont have it on dvd. I did have photos though xXx
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more please
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lol thanks xXxPurexXx
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hey sweetness thankyou very much xXxPurexXx
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My first lesbian experience wasn't quite like that, maybe it was her boyfriend watching us that did it *Thoughtful look* anyway loved the short story.
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thankyou xXxPurexXx
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It was true! *sighs*
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that was a true story?! GOD! i envy you!
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I normally don't read erotica. Like EVER. lol.
But this was actually pretty hot!
And the way you described things was awesome.
Keep writing & take care xx
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