Hello Coehlo, 1
I cannot wait anymore. This internet dating is not working for us. Now it is time that you leave your Bonnie at home and come to me in the tree where I live. It is in the park on the corner two blocks from your trailer. Please wear your yellow suit, with the green tie and pink shoes. And just in case I still don't recognise you, put a red rose behind your right ear. And tie purple streamers around the bamboo. (I mean the bamboo you always carry in your left hand - if you speak the truth to me.)2
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Poor Coehlo
Sorry, I'm just testing the New Storywrite. Not sure how you'll reciee this message, lol. Poor Coehlo still remains on his solitary island off Tonga. lol
They have cute little ratings for different sections and everything...bound to cause fights and hard feelings here, lol.
Lets see if I can start a fight with you.
And yes, I just clicked on the 3's. Let me know if you want the ratings in the future or just a comment.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, overall: 6, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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I actually quite like the new rating fingums... so go ahead in future, hit me with them when you read something of mine. And yeah, I'm a big girl now, so you don't have go gentle on poor little old me. I won't fight, I prefer to do my battles in person
Makes the making up afterwards lots more fun.
Keep well.
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I think that coehlo has a little something going down on the side (never mind the double entendre). Everything else measured in equal portions, undoubtably this is a work of friction.
Er...fiction. Although I have heard that bamboo is painful because of the friction.
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Hallo Janet Picket Fence...Coehlo happy to see you friend. Why you no call Coehlo clever? Coehlo hurt. Coehlo more to than hurt. Coehlo dying. You kill Coehlo. You have the killing on conscience...you deal with that Janet the Fence mender.
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excellent
Coehlo is so confuzzled. You really did it this time. You better be more careful who goes into your tree from now on.
Exact words. Perfect.
Such a clever lady.
Hugs
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Coehlo is so confuzzled. On the hand that is one, Coehlo has the Bonnie. On the other that is a hand Coehlo heart be pumping with the excitements. Coehlo thinks: Lacyte has a tree, that is to the side that is plussed. But Bonnie has keys to trailer and a bull that is pitted. So Coehlo say: Do Coehlo go for excitements or for no bited bum? How comfortable is Lacyte's tree?
Coehlo no dress how Lacyte so say. That is friend and collaborator Yanuchee. But Coehlo love bamboo...see Coehlo is so confuzzled!
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