lost again

lost in scenery1

lost in sky2

lost in feelings so sublime3

lost under blankets of lost depth perception4

lost under forgiveness and exception5

lost under words from the loving one6

lost between feelings of love and hate7

lost between love or lust at any rate8

lost between friend and foe who can relate9

lost with words pouring through lips10

lost with out wisdom as i watch it lift11

lost with in my self, its been a long trip12

lost, holding thoughts of regret13

lost, holding those thoughts but i wont let them set14

lost, holding feelings of everything being my debt15

lost among swirling clouds16

lost among whispering sounds17

lost among the happiest crowds18

lost above all feelings except bliss19

lost above all the things i miss20

lost above each and every heartbreak and kiss21

lost wondering free with no point and place22

lost in my mind, my own little escape, leaving with out a trace23

Author notes

im bored and im in the library at school and i need something to occupy my time so i wrote this...


in my own little world

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  • Bandit Boy
    January 31, 2006
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    YAy for katie's own little world, for her own little self.

    lovely poem katie
    you keep it up girl


  • Wolf Eire
    December 22, 2005
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    i liked it good job sorry i havent comented lately college is hectic an im always doing something lol. but great job and i guess ill ttyl.

  • Awnoewa
    December 7, 2005
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    I like being lost in my own world. I am quite often. I like it! I loved the line 'lost with in my self, its been a long trip' and I don't know why exactly. Love you Katie!
    Angie
    P.S. God invented mapquest for a reason you no...