:::Harry:::1
“Wait Kylie!!!” Cried out Harry as he raced after his mystery girl. It was just too much of a coincidence for her have the same last name, and her parents to have 'mysteriously died' soon after her birth when it was the same case with him. He was convinced that something must be up.2
"Kylie, you don't happen to remember anything from when you're parents died?" He asked, slightly out of breath from mere nervousness. He waited in apprehension as she stood and tried to decide, unsure of what her answer would be. 3
"Umm, all I remember is that their names were Lily and James, and I was really little when they died and then I remember a flash of green light," she said, unsure. Harry gasped and his jaw drops. 4
"It's exactly the same for me!" 5
--Flashback for both of them--6
*woman screaming* save my baby... dont leave \them\ (both heard him or her) here with me!7
*flash of green light... 2 dead people, you hear a baby crying and see Harry... they missed a very important detail though... there were TWO babies that night that survived*8
--End Flashback for both of them--9
"This is so weird..." said Kylie, extremely wary of how to act around this new found... what do you call a person who is tied to you with unseen strings? Harry looks more sure.10
"Are you here because you got invited to go to Hogwarts?" he said with more confidence.11
"Yes... Wait... How do you know about Hogwarts?! Is it around here?" She said, Harry waited for a second.12
"Ya, I go to Hogwarts and am in my 5th year. You will probobly enter in your... how old are you?"13
"15" Kylie answered... Harry looked unsurprised. 14
"A year younger then me... so you'll be in 4th year. I figured that if you were related to me you would have been automatically invited to Hogwarts... I was when I was born, so I'm betting that you were too. You should probobly come and live with me at The Burrow, a friend of mines house, and we can work out everything there."15
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wow thats odd..lol but great i enjoyed and its nice that he has a sister, its kind of obvious with the same looks and all lol
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This looks like it's going to be an excellently good story. To be honest I don't like this part of the story as much as the other three parts - I still like it though!! - because its more explaination than story, but don't get me wrong, I still like it!! Write the next part - please!
Keep Writing
~Talia Alyssa~
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GREAT!!!
This story is great! I can't wait until the next one comes out. Wait, is there going to be a next one? I really hope that there is. I love Harry Potter and I love reading the fanfic that people put out! I only have two out so far and haven't been able to continue because I have about five other stories to continue. But, anyhow, Love you stories. They are absolutely great! -
excellent.
i cant wait to read more
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Right I've read it all now and it is looking to be very interesting. I would have put a comment in with the others to but it doesn't matter. I really like this and I want more. Although you probably have exams this year so I'll be happy to wait about, say, three days? You put this up yesterday so I think that might be long enough...
Ok - fine make it a week... please put it up - it is so annoying when people don't finnish their stuff - espeacilly when it is good!
Remember to put it up! Other wise I won't comment ever again! So there!
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