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Sam sat in her room sobbing into her favorite teddy bear. How is she going to tell her mother, who never trusted her anyway. What will her father do, probably disown her. Sam knew they would leave her to do this all alone. She was so stupid, why had she trusted Danny? He seemed like a nice guy at first. As there date progressed however he began to touch her more and more. It was innocent enough at in the beginning just an arm around her shoulder but gradually his hand started to wander down her arm, over her skirt to her bare knee. Sam began getting uncomfortable. She didn't want to say anything because Danny was really the first guy that had ever shown any interest in her. Sam was kind of over weight and had pretty bad acne all over her face. She let him so what he wanted until he had his hand completely up Sam's skirt. That was where she had to draw the line. She politely told him to remove his hand but when he didn't she pushed his hand away gently. Sam could tell by the look in his eyes that he was getting angry but he tried once again to touch her and she firmly said no. He was really mad by this point and sharply smacked her across the face. She sat in shock for a few moments until she regained her voice. Sam started crying and yelling at Danny, but he just sat there until she was finished. When she stopped he calmly looked at her, placed his hand softly on her cheek, and said he was so sorry. He told her he didn't know what cam over him and that it would NEVER happen again. Danny concluded this by telling Sam that he loved her so much and would never want to hurt her. She was over joyed and kissed him passionately. Danny took this as a sign to do whatever he pleased. This time Sam ignored her instincts of discomfort and allowed him to continue until he started peeling her clothes off. At that she grasped his hand in hers an told him to stop that sshe wasn't ready for anything like this yet. He ignored her and grabbed her by her hair forcing her into the backseat of his car. Sam was crying in pain and screaming for him to stop but her screams only fueled him. Danny began ripping off her clothes until she was completely naked in front of him. He then forced himself into her she screamed one last time and then lay silent with her eyes closed tight to afraid to move and to numb to care. After a few moment she felt him tense and release inside of her. To her astonishment she felt herself explode and she moaned in pleasure. Sam was horrified and just lay there in utter shock. Danny threw her her clothes, smirked, and said I knew you would like it. She Sam quickly dressed and climbed into the front seat still silent. She was afraid to look at Danny so she just stared out the front windshield as he drove her home. They pulled up in front of her house and he told her to get out. She did as she was told and Danny sped off down the street. Sam ran up to her front door crying but remembered her mother,Denise, would still be up. She composed herself and walked casually into the house. As soon as she entered she was faced with a barrage of questions. Her mother's harsh mouth spit out question after question with a few insults in between. Where have you been bitch? Out whoring it I'm sure. Do you know what time it is you little slut? What will your father think? These questions didn't phase Sam she was used to the verbal abuse and non-trusting tone of her mother. Denise told her to go to her room and not come out until it was time for school the next morning. Sam walked to her room slamming and locking the door behind her.1

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  • Linda King CT-USA
    April 3, 2006
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    i think i read my life

    did this happen to you? it happened it me. i am sure alot of women on this site and others can relate to your words... you do need to put it into paragraphs, and fix some words - they aren't spelled properly.

    If you want or need help with editing I am here for you as a friend and fellow poet. Keep writing, it's good therapy and although i don't see how this particular story will have a happy ending, like in life = not all stories do.

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 4, overall: 6, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.