Pure Bliss and Fear

Absobing every moment with you1

while I allow my walls to collapse 2

and let you seep in3

every part of me is revealed4

as I fall to peices in your hands5

Like a lost child6

I'm insecure and scared7

cause when I look in your eyes 8

I get a rush of emotions I can't handle9

and I have to turn away10

I'm slipping11

and I don't know how things will turn out12

but with every kiss it turns into more of a fall13

and now I'm in mid-air14

in pure bliss and fear15

wondering if you'll be there to catch me when I land16

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  • bloodislikewine
    December 4, 2005
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    I remember you telling me about this. I'm telling you he cares about you. But I understand completely. You know I do cause we talked about it last night in the car (between the great sex..lol.)
    I don't know. I like it even if you don't. It's beautiful and sad and heartfelt and I just wanna hug you and make you feel loved.
    Great poem.
    ♥ Natasha

  • Zyi
    December 2, 2005
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    This was good. Intense.

    Muchlove
    Donna