Snow White Retold-Chapter 18

John:"So it's true.My Snow really did come back to me?"1

He grabbed me,and gave me one of those hugs I used to get as a child.2

John:"Well then,how does she know the Contess?"3

Snow:"She is the Contess' daughter.The Contess-"4

Contess:"Adopted her when she was younger."5

Scarlett:"NO!She had me when she was very very young sir.She left me at a boarding school.The same exact one that you sent Snow too.That is how we met,and I knew that the Contess was still alive.I was under the impression that she had died.I should have known better."6

Contess:"Alright alright.So,I have a daughter.I have my son now and that's all that matters."7

Snow:"A son father?"8

John:"Yes.I didn't think that you were going to come back.Contess,I think that it is time that you went back to where you came from."9

Contess:"John?Are you really going to take me back?"10

My father had a look of hurt in his eyes,but you could tell that he needed her out of his life.11

John:"Yes.Let the servant pack your things.I will arrange for the driver to take you at once."12

Contess:"But what about our son?"13

John:"He shall stay here with me."14

The Contess slowly walked off towards her room,and I snuck off to follow her.15

Snow:"You really thought you had me gone.Are you out of your mind?"16

Contess:"NO.I just wanted what was best for my husband.You reminded him too much of your mother,and you needed to be gone also."17

I walked over to the old chest and mirror.18

Snow:"Look at this.Eternal beauty and youth.That's a lie."19

Contess:"Don't touch that!"20

It was too late.I had already touched the mirror.It began to crack,and when it broke the Contess stood there with a shocked look on her face.21

Snow:"What is it?"22

Contess:"I thought that-Nevermind."23

Scarlett:"What was all the noise?Oo my.Mother,what happened to your hair?"24

Author notes

Next chapter will be the ending.

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  • Beauty Sleeps
    December 1, 2005
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    Aw, I'm glad you've added more! Thank you so much! I'm interested to see what happens next!!
    Kate