The blood spilled as the final words of our love were spoken. My sweet Kiley had come to rescue me from what John thought i woudld do. 1
John My best friend had nto tried to save me. He handed the gun over to me. The smooth cold gun that would soon take away all my pain and misery. 2
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" I heard kiley scream as i slowly put the gun to my head the indescrble sense of relief coming yet again. I looked forward as to maybe distract her from herself and hat she hoped to do. I'm so sorry kiley, i though to myself knowing i couldnt utter a word without my eyes tearing and my self shakeing. 3
"Aiden please dont do this" she cried as she ran faster than ever to come to my side. "AIDEN I LOVE YOU" she screamed so loud i could harly belive that soubd was coign from this girl i've come to love over the past 2 years. "Aiden please don't leave me" she begged me once again.4
The coldness of the gun soon touched my skin. I winced. Cold was never my favorite thing. I felt myself get warm with the sensation of the gun to my head. The feeling was so much better than the one of the knife slicing through my skin. I could jsut imagine what would happen as i puled that trigger and died my much anticipated suicide. 5
But why am i still here? I could've pulled the trigger before Kiley came. Why am i still here? PULL THE EFFING TRIGGER AIDEN PULL IT!6
"Kiley I'm sorry and I love you" I said all at once as i felt myself pull .........7
Author notes
OMG it takes too lomg to write as a guy. I'm a girl and i jsut dont know how you guys htink....maybe you dont 
....THis is part of the sotry i'm writing for english OMG ITS BTTER THAN MY FIRST PARAGRAP I TURNED IN AND HTIS ONE SUCKSSSSS.... anyway i dont liek it but i need to write it
needs another title
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THanks... sor y dont hget back to you alot but i'm like weird about it someitmes i dotn get the mesagaesd and stuff
much love
-Emz -
Hmmmm i guess you wont know till the end of the sotry cuase this is the end
lol but its the beggingin to love ya aubrey,... I'LL TALK TO YOU ON STAURDAY AND YOU BETTER BE ON SATURDAY CAUSE TRHATS THEO NLY TIME I CAN BE ON.. .I HAVE A SWIM MEET NEAR WISCONISN YAYS love ya
-Emssss -
Thanks its for my stupid english class this is the begigng and its gonna end liek this to only with more
love ya lol
-Emsssssssss -
ems u are amazing and great story! write more cuz i kinda wanna kno what happens! great job i cant really get on the compuetr too much this week after school or anythin so i guess ill talk to u this weekend!
-aubrey -
hey great story alot of emotion in this i loved it alot keep it up!
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* * * * : exellent!
very cool. i thought the character was a girl with a guy-ish name, but that might have something to do with the fact that in all ure other stories have girls for the main characters. very exellently written all the same. ill ttyl, emz!
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i will comment when i get out of history !!!!!!!!!!!
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