there's more to why i hate you1
although i cant explain it all2
many reasons let me think3
nope there's just one4
just in such description 5
your many different things6
jerk,asshole,scraggly tooth,7
stupid bastard,dope head,ugly,8
rude,mean,overbearing9
need i go on10
i bet you wonder why and how 11
i could say such things12
for the simple truth 13
i hate your guts 14
why cant you just accept it15
you follow me day and night 16
why don't you go away17
look at the room around you18
their still dancing 19
to the news of death20
whoever knew the sound so sweet21
that no one cared and would party on22
people hate you so just as i did 23
and still do 24
i think its quiet funny don't you25
now join the girls in pink 26
with flowers in their hair27
the prince and princess 28
celebrate with a little dance29
such beautiful harmony could come of ones death30
isn't it surprising 31
how this could be so sudden32
i told you not to mess with me 33
now you've gone and done it34
oh silly man such a silly man35
now i walk down the street 36
and think of what to do 37
should i let her live or kill her too38
a thing to be pondered39
you begged and pleaded in your mind40
i still hear it in my head 41
the screeching voice of your death 42
everything you say circles me around43
and now i enter the building44
then creep up the stairs 45
such a funny thing overcome with glee46
i guess you'll have to wait 47
because i haven't reached her yet48
but when i do shed better run49
because when the music changes she will fall50
its not over til the fat lady sings 51
no time tonight must get my sleep52
after all premeditation is the best53
i didn't get caught when i did away with you 54
pretty girl goes all too soon...55
Author notes
this is only part two part three will come later check in to see how it ends there might be a part four...
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Comments
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agreed with everyone above!!! this is good! keep it up
<3 Jarred -
Great Job
Love tour poem ans how you expressed your self and feelings about his person i have a poem something like this but it is bout a family member. But anyway love your poem continue your work great job. -
A beautiful, touching write. I find it really soothing and at times; bleak yet still mostly soothing and a joy to be a small part of as the reader. Thank you.


