I hate everything about you II

there's more to why i hate you1

although i cant explain it all2

many reasons let me think3

nope there's just one4

just in such description 5

your many different things6

jerk,asshole,scraggly tooth,7

stupid bastard,dope head,ugly,8

rude,mean,overbearing9

need i go on10

i bet you wonder why and how 11

i could say such things12

for the simple truth 13

i hate your guts 14

why cant you just accept it15

you follow me day and night 16

why don't you go away17

look at the room around you18

their still dancing 19

to the news of death20

whoever knew the sound so sweet21

that no one cared and would party on22

people hate you so just as i did 23

and still do 24

i think its quiet funny don't you25

now join the girls in pink 26

with flowers in their hair27

the prince and princess 28

celebrate with a little dance29

such beautiful harmony could come of ones death30

isn't it surprising 31

how this could be so sudden32

i told you not to mess with me 33

now you've gone and done it34

oh silly man such a silly man35

now i walk down the street 36

and think of what to do 37

should i let her live or kill her too38

a thing to be pondered39

you begged and pleaded in your mind40

i still hear it in my head 41

the  screeching voice of your death 42

everything you say circles me around43

and now i enter the building44

then creep up the stairs 45

such a funny thing overcome with glee46

i guess you'll have to wait 47

because i haven't reached her yet48

but when i do shed better run49

because when the music changes she will fall50

its not over til the fat lady sings 51

no time tonight must get my sleep52

after all premeditation is the best53

i didn't get caught when i did away with you 54

pretty girl goes all too soon...55

Author notes

this is only part two part three will come later check in to see how it ends there might be a part four...

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  • -Jarred-
    November 29, 2005
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    agreed with everyone above!!! this is good! keep it up

    <3 Jarred


  • Reina
    November 29, 2005
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    Great Job

    Love tour poem ans how you expressed your self and feelings about his person i have a poem something like this but it is bout a family member. But anyway love your poem continue your work great job.

  • Hiraldo
    November 29, 2005
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    A beautiful, touching write. I find it really soothing and at times; bleak yet still mostly soothing and a joy to be a small part of as the reader. Thank you.